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Deborahlee
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0 posted 05-12-2000 03:17 AM       View Profile for Deborahlee   Email Deborahlee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborahlee

My heart was broken, tattered and torn,
by a lost love who broke all promises sworn
I felt like total darkness banned from the sun,
after all of the work that he had done

Then you came to me an angel in the night,
and fought for my heart with all your might
I truly believe God sent you that day,
words can never be enough for all I want to say.

It's because of you I no longer bleed,
It's because of you I continue to breathe
Thank you for beliveing in me,
thank you for seeing the beautiful woman someone else did not see


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1 posted 05-12-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DeborahLee~
This is just lovely.
I'm glad another has seen the beauty in your heart.
New eyes
New view
Makes it all worthwhile.
~*Marge*~


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REBECCA ALLYN
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2 posted 05-12-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

I totally relate to poem because it reminds me how I feel about my boyfriend James. He put up with a lot to be with me and I am enternally grateful!!!
great work!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
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3 posted 05-12-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Deborahlee! I'm sure your beauty wasn't too hard for someone to see!

Denise
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