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I Must Have Been Dreaming

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Marge Tindal
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I Must Have Been Dreaming
~*Marge Tindal*~

You must have been a dream,
I was just waking up from.
The words you whispered in my ear
linger fresh upon my tongue.

Remembering the moment,
I wasn't so sure was a dream.
It all was so real
or so it would seem.

Did you kiss my lips ?
Did you whisper in my ear ?
Did you lay your body close,
saying things I wanted to hear ?

Why was the dream so real ?
I'd swear that you were here.
Darling, come again into my dream world,
so I can hold you near.

I was certain I must have been dreaming,
until you called to say,
'I had the nicest dream of you.
Thanks for the smile I wear today.'


Was it a dream ?  
Tuck me back into it's folds !




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 05-12-2000 02:04 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marge~ Ahhh yes, I've had dreams like this. I wake up feeling drug out and want to go back to that dream world! I loved this! -SEA
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The sanctity of our innermost being - The safety zone.... Nicely said, My Friend Margie...>*
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3 posted 05-12-2000 07:42 AM       View Profile for Tuck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tuck

don't you love dreams like this?...when you wake up and remember, it's almost like you're still dreaming  
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~Aawww,..this was such a wonderful piece,..like a soft and pillowy kind of read....Very neat,..thank you.
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5 posted 05-12-2000 09:12 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is so dreeaammy, Marge! *sigh* When I wake up from wonderful, life-like dreams I always wish that dreams could come true. This poem is a dream come true!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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Marge~
      
     I, too, have had dreams like this, and all I wanted to do was crawl back under the covers and sleep for the rest of the day!

Love Ya!~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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7 posted 05-12-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Marge (it IS Marge this time, right?), I think it was a beautiful piece. Nice, fresh idea to come from. I haven't tried writing from the dream aspect yet (never thought about it frankly). I love the way you put it together. A really lovely poem.

j.
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Beautiful dream, Marge! Now come on, you can't sleep all day....come on, Marge, it's time to get up.....Marge, Marge, MARGE!......hehehehehe

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Well miss Marge...when you're ready to wake up..*eghem*...send some of those dreams my way...he he This was adorable hun!!! Love ya!!

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Hey, Marge, that wasn't any dream.
You had a date with that Jim Beam!
You held him to your lips all night
Smiled as he filled you with delight.

Your whole world disappeared from view
The moment that he entered you
You grabbed his neck and held him high
And, by the morn, you drained him dry.

Last week Jack Daniels was your guy
But now you've left him high and dry
If you don't change your evil way
Your fiancee will be Ben Gay!!!!!!
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SEA~
Oh yeah !  Take me back to those dreams !

Nan~
I like that - 'The Safety Zone' ....
but ... but, I wanna live dangerously !  

Tuck~
I do indeed !  Thanks.

ESP~
I wish you many 'dreeaammy' dreams.  

TerryW~
Yes !  Yes !  Yes !
'Tuck me back into it's folds'  

JWesley~
Thank you for your comments.
It occurs to me that I'd love to
dream it again just the same way !

Denise~
Don't wanna get up !  

Devina~
Dreams EXPRESS Are Us !  

Balladeer~
Now you KNOW I don't do Jack !  
And it occurs to me that you don't know Jack .... !  

~*Marge*~




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12 posted 05-12-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

ROFL!!!
ok ok! I concede! That comeback was TOO good!
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Balladeer~
LOL !  
LOVE YA'
HAPPY MUTHER'S DAY !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Oh Lovely dream poem, Marge. Me when
I get a great dream like that I go
back to sleep and finish it. ---)

netswan
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NetSwan~
Exactly !  Thank you.
~*Marge*~


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What a terrific poem Marge.  Ahhh those dreams that make us wonder..... This is just beautiful.  Bonnie
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What a wonderful, dreamy poem Marge ... such satisfaction when dreams and realities mix ... I loved the flow and the ending!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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18 posted 05-13-2000 08:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BSC~
Thank you so much.
The dreams do touch reality so many times.

Kit~
So many wonderful dreams.
Thank you ... glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~



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