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Sven
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0 posted 2000-05-12 12:32 PM


Share with me thy love, fairest lady of the night
Shine your love like a beacon, aiding my once-hindered sight
Speak to me the words that only true lovers know
Whisper them to my heart in a voice only I can hear
Your words the very essence helping our love to grow
Our love the one thing I hold close to my heart most dear
Being here with you my heart's one true delight
Holding your hand in mine, our souls taking flight

Stay with me my love until breaks the dawn of the new day
Listen to the words that I've waited my whole life to say
Touch my life with the power of your passionate love
Touch my soul with the heat of your delicate caress
Sing to me that song known only by the morning's first dove
Calm my heart's longing and put my silly fears to rest
Fairest lady of the night please I beseech thee stay
Shine your love upon my heart's path that I may see the way

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Isis
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1 posted 2000-05-12 12:38 PM


Beautiful again Sven, hope your beacon sees your light too  

 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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2 posted 2000-05-12 12:56 PM


Oh, somehow I don't think that you have much trouble convincing your Lady of the Night to stay, with songs like these.  Truly beautiful.  

Christina =^..^=

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3 posted 2000-05-12 01:00 AM


Such pretty verse, my friend...and such a sweet appeal...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 2000-05-12 11:49 AM


Oh Sven, you know I like this one!  I think you read, "His Lighthouse" of mine.  This one is so closely wonderful to that!  I love this whole concept....now I know what you mean by saying, "Have I been peaking in your notebook!"   ROFLMAO  I promise, I haven't!  Kinda spooky, 'eh?  LOL  Did I say this was wonderful?  Thanks for sharing your warm side with us.....aaaahhh.  
devina
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5 posted 2000-05-12 12:28 PM


  *Deep Breath*

This was simply divine Sven!!!! *sigh* I love this side of you dear!!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Denise
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6 posted 2000-05-12 12:44 PM


Oh, Sven, you are such the romantic! This is lovely!

Denise

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7 posted 2000-05-12 06:41 PM


Thank you all. . .

Isis, the light shines. . .

bobbycat, thank you so much. . .

Claire, thank you, I'm trying to more structured verse. . . it's coming. . .

pFF, again, I have to ask, "Have you been peeking in my notebook?"  LOL. . .yes, it is kinda spooky, and I always share my warm side here. . .

Devina, thank you as always. . .and don't take too deep of a breath. . .

Denise, is there any other way to be?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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