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CMGrimm
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0 posted 05-11-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CMGrimm

I came over here tonight
to listen to the sound
of your heart
beating next to mine.

I wanted to touch your face
and feel your skin
slowly caress mine
as you slid your body
across me.

I longed for your tender kisses
and gentle whispers
in my ear...

I came here tonight because I missed you..
and I missed me and you...


Christopher M. Grimm




 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


© Copyright 2000 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 05-11-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Ah, Chris...so sweet and bittersweet, intermingled. Lovely writing...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


CMGrimm
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2 posted 05-11-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks Claire...long time no see.....lol.

Missed you all...glad to be back.


chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 05-12-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, ChrisG~
Wow !  This sultry render sure makes me glad you're back too.

Beautiful ....

'I longed for your tender kisses
and gentle whispers
in my ear...'

Oh, yeah ... like that's my Nytol !
Thanks a lot !  
~*Marge*~




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with you


4 posted 05-12-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

CM~ Wow! It just got very warm here at my computer!Soooo sweet, very sexy. Me like. -SEA
netswan
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5 posted 05-12-2000 04:20 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

wow chris -------- hiss in your
ear, with a love like that -
hold on to it.
netswan
CMGrimm
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6 posted 05-12-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks Marge and Sea and swan....your comments are always deeply appreciated...

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7 posted 05-12-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Chris! Nice to see you again!  

Denise
REBECCA ALLYN
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8 posted 05-12-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

WoW! I can't even summon words.
Such very beautiful work!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
CMGrimm
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9 posted 05-12-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks Becky and Denise....


chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


JamesMichael
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10 posted 05-12-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"to listen to the sound of your heart beating next to mine"  such lovely thoughts and it keeps getting lovelier and lovelier.
I enjoyed reading this romantic, soft and tender poem.  James
Janet Marie
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11 posted 05-12-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I wanted to touch your face
and feel your skin
slowly caress mine
as you slid your body
across me.

I longed for your tender kisses
and gentle whispers
in my ear...

I came here tonight because I missed you..
and I missed me and you...

------------
OH MAN!!
*sigh*

its gonna be along weekend..*smile*
I gotta get my hands on a poet LOL
this is about the 4th sensual
poem Ive read.
VERY nice work here...
sensual and tender...
VERY NICE,
take care,jm

 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


CMGrimm
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12 posted 05-13-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks Everybody!!

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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