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babeluv73
Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19


0 posted 2000-05-11 10:47 PM


A Feeling…

I have this feeling inside my soul.
I wanna cry, but my tears won’t let go.
I feel the pain of a broken heart.
I can hear it shred as it comes apart.
I don’t understand
How you just fell out of love.
You let me believe
That I was the one.
Can it be that I’m not who your heart sees?
Is there another who has you down on your knees?
Another who changed your path,
Took you away so you couldn’t look back?
Maybe I’m just jealous,
But I can’t help but think
That you’re in someone else’s arms
Saying to her what you used to say to me.


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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-11 11:08 PM


Tears are flowing in this forum today.
This is wonderful and very sad ---
and with a person like that  --- brush
yourself off ----for one like that is
not worth lovin' and tearing your lovely
heart apart.

You take care

netswan

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-05-12 01:43 PM


Hi Babeluv!
It's a heart wrenching feeling and it'll occur in moments of separation. You can judge from the past events and if your friend had opened his heart totally to you and had not hid anything at all times you can believe him. As I believe my friend after few unhappy moments when I was weak. She's a wonderful person who showed kindness when I was a bit cruel. I'll never lie to her or see anyother
person in the same way when I'm away from her.
(((((Hugs)))))))))
A_L

CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

3 posted 2000-05-12 02:51 PM


Oh boy, kleenex box out near keyboard for me today.  The feelings you've put to pen have truly come thru on screen. Thanks for sharing with me.
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-05-12 03:26 PM


I'm sure many can relate to a broken heart. It's never easy....you have expressed the pain well.

Denise

REBECCA ALLYN
Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91
Lima,Ohio
5 posted 2000-05-12 06:19 PM


Very,very good!!!
your work is inspiring

LOTS of LUV,
Becky

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