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babeluv73
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0 posted 05-11-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

A FeelingÖ

I have this feeling inside my soul.
I wanna cry, but my tears wonít let go.
I feel the pain of a broken heart.
I can hear it shred as it comes apart.
I donít understand
How you just fell out of love.
You let me believe
That I was the one.
Can it be that Iím not who your heart sees?
Is there another who has you down on your knees?
Another who changed your path,
Took you away so you couldnít look back?
Maybe Iím just jealous,
But I canít help but think
That youíre in someone elseís arms
Saying to her what you used to say to me.

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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


1 posted 05-11-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Tears are flowing in this forum today.
This is wonderful and very sad ---
and with a person like that  --- brush
yourself off ----for one like that is
not worth lovin' and tearing your lovely
heart apart.

You take care

netswan
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


2 posted 05-12-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Babeluv!
It's a heart wrenching feeling and it'll occur in moments of separation. You can judge from the past events and if your friend had opened his heart totally to you and had not hid anything at all times you can believe him. As I believe my friend after few unhappy moments when I was weak. She's a wonderful person who showed kindness when I was a bit cruel. I'll never lie to her or see anyother
person in the same way when I'm away from her.
(((((Hugs)))))))))
A_L
CocoBaci
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since 05-06-2000
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3 posted 05-12-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Oh boy, kleenex box out near keyboard for me today.  The feelings you've put to pen have truly come thru on screen. Thanks for sharing with me.
Denise
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4 posted 05-12-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm sure many can relate to a broken heart. It's never easy....you have expressed the pain well.

Denise
REBECCA ALLYN
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Posts 91
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5 posted 05-12-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Very,very good!!!
your work is inspiring

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
 
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