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Don't Let Me Hope
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Don't Let Me Hope |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 It’s starting again, I wish it would cease This feeling of hope breaking my peace Just when I was content and ready to heal You walk in with laughter and loving zeal I don’t want to wonder where this will go I don’t want to feel and I don’t want to know I reach for the past and look to remind That’s where this will go...I’m not blind I don’t want to love you and don’t want to care You’ll leave in the end and my embrace will be bare Alone to pick up the shattered remains I fight off the hope and my control drains So stay where you are and don’t let me hope once more For my heart can’t take this.... so I’ve locked the door [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 05-11-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
B.D.C. Such beauty and apin in these words, my friend. I hope that all is well with you. Please remember..."nothing ventured, nothing gained". Keeping you in my thoughts. {{{HUGS}}} LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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babeluv73 Junior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 19 |
WOW! That's all i can say! i so understand how you feel. I actually started crying when i read it. But just for thought...you'll never touch truelove if you don't take the chance. babeluv73 |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
My dear sweet butterly ----here is the key to that door ----life is precious and one never knows when it shall end. Take each precious moment and learn to trust again. Beautiful poem, by the way --) Hugs from netswan |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Truly beautiful, B.D.C. Wonderfully put. Have you tried reading it without the word "for" in the last line? Just a thought. Remember...for every love lost, there's a dozen more waiting to share your heart, and you'll never find "the one" if you lock them all out. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
true love does not imprison or chain, it allows a heart to breathe again. trust your heart to hold the key, remember this is meant to be... & BUTTERFLIES ARE MEANT TO BE FREE.  JM need I say more? *smile* (except) love this poem!!! and the poet who wrote it . It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ 'For my heart can’t take this' So poignant are these words ... sweetie, I hope you find that special someone who has the key to unlock your loving heart again. Beautifully sad. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
L.W. Yes all is well thank you for caring and thank you for reading my friend. babeluv73* The touch of poetry...when it works...is very strong. Thank you so much for reading. Netswan* *hugs*  thanks! And thank you for reading jwesley* Thank you for your kind words, and thank you for your input it's appreciated. J.M.* No need to say more Thank you for Everything! **AWhugs** S.S. Marge* You are one sweet lady And I hope so too, thank you sooooo much![This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***butterflies, this is a gorgeous poem, but so sad. it really touched me.all your work does... well done. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It sounds as though you have let your pain bring you much wisdom, Butterflies! Good for you! This is beautifully done! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mete* Thank you as always you are much to sweet! Denise* I'm not sure it's wisdom....lol but thank you so much for reading |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
I understand!!and I love this poem!! such beautiful words it reminds me of myself!!! SMILE LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This poem is so full of emotion. Another example of your fine writing. Really like the butterfly image! and, thanks for responding to my poem. Danny |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
WOW! butterfly this is so emotive, such sadness, pain, and longing expressed so beautifully. Well done my friend! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Echoes of my soul .. Amen. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I'll ditto Kess...indeed echoes of my soul. Except I haven't locked the door...keeping hope and watching yourself get slammed again and again is a hard way to go through life, thats for sure...powerful and so true are your words, butterflies_dont_cry. *Krista Knutson* ~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~ |
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