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She Is... (Nan's students' Mother's Day tribute)

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Class
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0 posted 05-11-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for Class   Email Class   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Class


My wonderful students wrote these great tributes to their mothers for a very special day...
Mother's Day - May 14, 2000.
Enjoy..    

SHE IS



by S.

My mom is nice and caring
I wonder what she thinks of me
I hear her say nice things
I see her doing good deeds
I want her to stay the same
My mom is nice and caring

I pretend we travel different places
I feel that she is kind
I think she worries too much
I worry that she'll get sick
I cry when I do something wrong
My mom is nice and caring

I understand that she gets mad at me for good reasons
I say to her, "I Love You"
I dream I will go somewhere with her
I hope she loves me as much as I love her
My mom is nice and caring


by J.

My mom is an alien
I wonder what she is not
I hear her talk
I see her cook food
I want her not to be an alien
My mom is an alien

I pretend we are having fun
I feel her hugging me
I think she is an alien
I worry she will zap me
I cry in my dreams she tries to zap me
My mom is an alien

I understand she is not an alien
I say to her, "Are you an alien?"
I dream she will fly to space
I try to make sure she does not have a zapper
I hope she does not have a zapper
My mom is an alien



by E.

My mother is wonderful
I wonder what she does when I'm in school
I hear her sweet voice
I see her make us dinner
I want her to be happy
My mother is wonderful

I pretend we are famous
I feel that she deserves more
I think she is the best
I worry that she'll be mad at me sometimes
I cry when she is unhappy
My mother is wonderful

I understand that she gets mad sometimes
I say to her, "I Love You"
I dream of a day just she and I are on a shopping spree
I try to behave
I hope she likes this poem
My mother is wonderful



by J.

My mom is nice and kind
I wonder what she thinks
I hear her cooking
I see her watch TV
I want her to live forever
My mom is nice and kind

I pretend we are rich
I feel that she is perfect
I think she is just worried
I worry that she will die
I cry when she is sick
My mom is nice and kind

I understand she works hard
I say to her get me dinner
I dream she did not have to work
I try to be as kind as I can
I hope she lives a good life
My mom is nice and kind



by J.

My mother is funny
I wonder what she thinks
I hear her tell not funny jokes
I see her fly super high
I want her to tell funny jokes
My mother is funny

I pretend we don't have a good time together
I feel that she shouldn't live in a cuckoo bin
I think she loves us all
I worry that her hair will turn orange
I cry when she leaves me
My mother is funny

I understand that she has to work
I say to her, "Cuckoo Bin"
I dream she will go surfing
I try to do my best
I hope she won't have that funny laugh
My mother is funny



by S.

My Mummy is beautiful and caring
I wonder what she believes I will give her for Mother's Day
I hear her footsteps on the stairs
I want her to come in slow motion so I can hide the gift
My Mummy is beautiful and caring

I pretend we haven't gotten a gift
I feel that she knows we have
I think she has bionic hearing & X-Ray vision
I worry that she'll catch me working on it
I cry when she leaves fosr very long periods of time
My Mummy is beautiful and caring

I understand that she doesn't have all day for us
I say to her, "Uh, I have to, uh... go shopping!"
I dream of having such a singing voice as hers
I try to sing as her
I hope someday I will
My Mummy is beautiful and caring






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-13-2000).]
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Nan
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1 posted 05-13-2000 12:20 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Happy Mother's Day to all...



Denise
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2 posted 05-13-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

These are delightful, Nan! Your kids are precious and their Moms are blessed to have them and they are blessed to have those wonderful Moms!

Denise
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3 posted 05-13-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow! These are great! I think my own kids would agree with the 'alien mom' poem! I enjoyed these very much..I'm sure their moms will too..  
netswan
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4 posted 05-13-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

These are all just precious --

Thanks for sharing these

HaPpy MoThEr's  DaY
netswan
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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5 posted 05-13-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

These are wonderful poems!  You are a bunch of very talented students!  Congratulations to you all for writing such beautiful poems about your mothers!
And Nan, it was a GREAT idea to put your students' poems in here for us to enjoy!
MissNTrope
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6 posted 05-13-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for MissNTrope   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for MissNTrope

These are some pretty special young people here. Moms are very special too - It's nice to see everyone so wonderfully appreciative..
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7 posted 05-13-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

These are great, Nan. The alien kid has a real future! Love them!!!
tracie66
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8 posted 05-14-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Nan~
Thanks for sharing these with us   aren't they just wonderful kids they know exactly what to say and say it straight from the heart.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Nan
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9 posted 05-14-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Thanks for enjoying these works, my friends - This is a pretty special group of kids...

You do me proud, you guys!!

Bunny
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10 posted 05-14-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Bunny   Email Bunny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bunny

This is an excellent poem!  It really teaches you how much your mother means to you!  Thank you for posting it!  It brings a little light into a dusty world.
Kellsue
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These were simply delightful!  Thank you for sharing them with us!!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill


 
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