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Your Champion

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First__Knight
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0 posted 05-11-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

Your Champion
~First Knight~


Let me be your Champion,
The one that fights for you.
Your one and only spirit,
Your Champion through and through.

Iíll gladly stand before you,
To hold the world at bay.
Thereís nothing I would not do,
Nothing I would not say.

Iíll slay the dragon called ďLonelyĒ.
Iíll carry all your weight.
Iíll lift the burden of worry.
Iím sure youíll see the fate.

Let me be your Champion,
There is no cause to small.
I would swim any ocean.
Or climb any wall.  

Let me fly your colors.
To battle I would ride.
To fight for your honor
With respect as my guide.  

Love, honor, and cherish.
Things to give a wife.
Give me please this duty
To be Champion of your life.



 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 05-11-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Another masterpiece presented here, what a talent.  
One day you will make someone very happy.  
brian madden
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2 posted 05-11-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

some women say that men are not interested in romance. Thank you for proving that chivalry is alive. Great poem.
netswan
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3 posted 05-11-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

First_Knight -- well done -----
ah to find such a champion --)

netswan
lorilockheart
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4 posted 05-11-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Your name certainly fits your words here.  I think you are a "First" Class "Knight" all the way.  I really like your work - you certainly don't disappoint
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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First__Knight
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5 posted 05-11-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh such words of kindness...thank you lost Dreamer

quite welcome Brian

Thank you Netswan

Your far to kind Lori

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 05-11-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

What a lovely and romantic poem FirstKnight ... and what a lucky lady to be on the receiving end of your devotion.  Beautiful!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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7 posted 05-11-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

First Knight. . . you definitely hold the standard high with this one. . . I believe that we all seek our champion. . .

Excellent poem. ..

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

First__Knight
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8 posted 05-13-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Kit....and Sven

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


SpitFire
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~This is wonderful work here.  A champion indeed...like this lots.
First__Knight
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10 posted 05-16-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Spitfire

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Denise
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11 posted 05-16-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very lovely, David!

Denise
First__Knight
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Thank you Denise

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Irish Rose
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wow! written to melt any woman's heart.

 "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning
hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 06-06-2000 10:04 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah David...I'd thought I had replied to this one, but I guess not. You don't have to be a champion, just be the sweet,caring person that you are and that should be more than enough for any woman  
JamesMichael
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15 posted 06-06-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice thoughts...and may you find the woman to connect them with.   James
netswan
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16 posted 06-07-2000 03:40 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

I saw this earlier today and I remembered
what a great poem this was, and had already
read and responded to it, but thought JM's is doing your favorite poem you have ever written challenge.

This is worth sending back to the top,
and so it shall happen

~netswan
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