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Someday - one-day - hopefully - maybe

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RainbowGirl
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Someday - one-day - hopefully - maybe
a love will sound both loud and clear
whatever the problems we'll work it out
rich in the knowledge we'll both be here

No more worrying about words that are said
instead we'll spoon some old fashioned hugs
secure as we smile when passion is calm
recognising the depth and value of love

Out the door you'll go a note inside your briefcase
smiling to myself at your look of deep surprise
around mid-day you start to read your papers
as I'm creating twinkles deep inside your eyes

Someday -one-day - hopefully - maybe
your love will surprise me as well
my eyes will burn like flashing emeralds
so priceless the fortune you'll never sell

Someday -one-day - hopefully - maybe ...


© Copyright 2000 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Corazon
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1 posted 05-11-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

oh I love this....I want a somedayonedayhopefullymaybe too!!!!!!!!!
big hugs lady....good to see you back  
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2 posted 05-11-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Here's to a future of smiles! *S* And just this once, I'll ditto Corazon. LOL. It IS good to see you back!  
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 05-11-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Rainbow,
Someday, one day, hopefully, maybe.
He will come so hush baby.
At the end of your rainbow lies a treasure,
If not in gold then in pleasure.
*L*
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 05-11-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

this brings smiles and warm fuzzies...
love those little unexpected notes of love
~nice writing~
First__Knight
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5 posted 05-11-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

With love you have Rainbow.......I know oneday......it will be    Very lovely

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


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RainbowGirl~
You romantic little thang !
Why this fairly sings off the scale !

I love it !
When that charming man enters ...
HUSG him tight.

Love you, gal friend !
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 05-12-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is full of beautiful wishes, Cindy. I hope they all come true!

Denise
miriam
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8 posted 05-12-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

you're back!!! and with a bang!! what a beautiful poem!!! keep up all the good work and don't disappear like that again.
cjs9853
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9 posted 05-13-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

Good things come to good people Don't stop dreaming.Beautiful Glad your back.
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10 posted 05-13-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

hehe. You create those twinkles inside my eyes right now, Cindy. Just the thought of you does that. I'm THRILLED to see you back! HUSG!!
tracie66
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11 posted 05-14-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

HUSG~
this one was a beauty   so lovely a read thanks for sharing it.
Tracie
P.S good to see you back  


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Pepper
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Someday, oneday .. he'll be one lucky fellow   ... I agree, Cindy, great to see you back
           (((HUSG)))
Lovely poem, dear .....
Kit McCallum
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13 posted 05-14-2000 08:52 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful poem Rainbow ... I particularly liked the last verse and line!  Beautiful and flowing with romantic sentiments ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
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