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My Dream
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My Dream |
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aurora New Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 9 |
To hold you is yet a dream From which I never wish to awake. Your touch, Your eyes It is my heart you can take. If only for an instant I could make you see My passion for you Your heart belongs to me One day you will hear my cry And I will awake To look into your eyes For it is my heart you can take. For on that day My dreams will come true And I will finally know That I am loved by you |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I have the same dream,yet I have insomnia at the moment, I will only rest when I find true love. Great poem, definitely struck a chord. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
aurora, this is lovely -----may you find that love in life ---) It is wonderful to be loved by someone netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great poem aurora "And all that time I never thought my dreams would come true But, girl, now I know they have 'cause I found my dreams in you" keep 'em coming All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Aurora~ Very pretty. Sentimental thoughts that flow from the heart are so refreshing. Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
Perfectly beautiful!!! Such a way with words you have!! keep em' coming LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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