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On Butterfly Wings(Haiku)

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


0 posted 05-11-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ESP


On Butterfly Wings

Fluttering gently
Wings the hue of fairy dust
Butterfly beauty




 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
© Copyright 2000 ESP - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-11-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i likums haikus i did think they were p u back in grade school but i likes em lots these days and this one is exceptional as in good yuh
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2 posted 05-11-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

I love Haiku...so simple yet they tell a lot.  Yours is beautiful.  I think I may go write a Haiku now...  

~Kelly


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You flutter beautifully ESP  
mete out
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4 posted 05-11-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***esp,
this is so elegant!
well done!


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nice haiku  
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6 posted 05-11-2000 01:42 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lil' Lizzie~

Stunning are your words
Beauty in flight among us
Fly, Butterfly ... fly

Love ya' gal
~*Marge*~


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I love haiku's. but I never could write them maybe I'll have a go later.
P.A.

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Do you hate the way you feel,
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ESP
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8 posted 05-12-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thanks for your replies everybody!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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This is beautiful, Lizzie!

Denise
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yours is truly a beauty too
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11 posted 10-26-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Well done haiku, Lizzie. You painted the butterfly beautifully.

Elizabeth


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Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth


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Your haiku flutters across my heart, I love butterflies and you express the magic of them so well!  

Melissa~
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