How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #7 Archive
 a SPOT on my record.
 1 2 3 4 5 6
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

a SPOT on my record.

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
PericolosoAmore
Junior Member
since 04-14-2000
Posts 31


0 posted 05-11-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for PericolosoAmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PericolosoAmore


Acne, like a monster,

Crawling through my body,

Nibbling at my pours,

Ever never ending.


........eating me away.
© Copyright 2000 PericolosoAmore - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
Member Elite
since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


1 posted 05-11-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Mmmm those darn pimples (yuk) and I'm still getting them from time to time and I'm nearly 34 (bummer).
This was good not what I expected but good just the same  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


2 posted 05-11-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Frustrating aren't they?  Wanna hear a great remedy?  Kaopectate! Seriously ... read it in a teen magazine about 20 years ago, and it still works. A little dab'l do ya before you head to bed!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 11-06-1999
Posts 43042
Florida's Foreverly Shores


3 posted 05-11-2000 07:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Peri~
Not a laughing matter ...
but brought a smile anyway !

My children used Calomine Lotion
applied with a cotton swab at night.
Pretty little pink dots all over those
teen faces ... cute and healing.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 05-11-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This poem can be read a few ways, interesting  
angelswing
Senior Member
since 02-10-2000
Posts 718
United Kingdom


5 posted 05-18-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Well done bud, I liked this one just because it's different honest and has a great perspective . Nicely does it . keep up the good work . When are you puting your next one up ?
L.of.L. Tommy boy .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
netswan
Senior Member
since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


6 posted 05-18-2000 05:23 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow, look at all the remedies you
are getting for Acne --)
Cool poem -
Acne starts from the inside out -- clogged
pores start with built up oil and dirt then
reach their annoying heads.

Make sure you are eating properly getting
the right vitamins - and the proper veggies.
Try to get away from deep fried foods and
greasy potatoes chips. And make sure you
are getting at least 5 glasses of pure
water everyday, along with the other liquids
you need daily.

Eat Carrots and sweet potatoes or yams

Never scrub your skin - use a soap that is pure, put it in your hands with water and
pat it on your face - -rinse with clear
water and pat dry with a clean towel.

Also, many many shampoos help with the
irritation of acne as you rinse your hair,
make sure you rinse your forehead and back
very well.  Again, do not scrub. Do not
pick -- if you can't resist --pull away on
each side the eruption before going to
poke at it, and never use straight fingernails, that will leave scars for sure.

THINK that just about all people have had
pimples, some worse than others - and have
managed to survive those pimply years.

Well, your poem has caused a splash.

netswan

 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #7 >> a SPOT on my record. Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors