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PericolosoAmore
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-05-11 04:55 AM



Acne, like a monster,

Crawling through my body,

Nibbling at my pours,

Ever never ending.


........eating me away.

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tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
1 posted 2000-05-11 05:27 AM


Mmmm those darn pimples (yuk) and I'm still getting them from time to time and I'm nearly 34 (bummer).
This was good not what I expected but good just the same  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-05-11 06:44 AM


Frustrating aren't they?  Wanna hear a great remedy?  Kaopectate! Seriously ... read it in a teen magazine about 20 years ago, and it still works. A little dab'l do ya before you head to bed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-05-11 07:01 AM


Peri~
Not a laughing matter ...
but brought a smile anyway !

My children used Calomine Lotion
applied with a cotton swab at night.
Pretty little pink dots all over those
teen faces ... cute and healing.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-05-11 08:54 AM


This poem can be read a few ways, interesting  
angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
5 posted 2000-05-18 04:36 AM


Well done bud, I liked this one just because it's different honest and has a great perspective . Nicely does it . keep up the good work . When are you puting your next one up ?
L.of.L. Tommy boy .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
6 posted 2000-05-18 05:23 AM


Wow, look at all the remedies you
are getting for Acne --)
Cool poem -
Acne starts from the inside out -- clogged
pores start with built up oil and dirt then
reach their annoying heads.

Make sure you are eating properly getting
the right vitamins - and the proper veggies.
Try to get away from deep fried foods and
greasy potatoes chips. And make sure you
are getting at least 5 glasses of pure
water everyday, along with the other liquids
you need daily.

Eat Carrots and sweet potatoes or yams

Never scrub your skin - use a soap that is pure, put it in your hands with water and
pat it on your face - -rinse with clear
water and pat dry with a clean towel.

Also, many many shampoos help with the
irritation of acne as you rinse your hair,
make sure you rinse your forehead and back
very well.  Again, do not scrub. Do not
pick -- if you can't resist --pull away on
each side the eruption before going to
poke at it, and never use straight fingernails, that will leave scars for sure.

THINK that just about all people have had
pimples, some worse than others - and have
managed to survive those pimply years.

Well, your poem has caused a splash.

netswan


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