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Lovey dovey crocodile
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovey dovey crocodile Now it's 7:00 p.m. and she didn't show so off to the movies we won't go. I call her up kind of pissed... and the conversation goes something like this. "Baby, I'm sorry to inform you but this is the way it be... I have no time for you, if you have no time for me. So don't act so surprised if I say I'm thru with you. Thats right!!! Its over and done!!! Did you think begging you to go to a movie is my idea of having fun? So I guess I'll not see you later alligator. Right now I'm gonna take a shower and go to bed and clear all these silly disagreements out of my head." Now it's 11:00 p.m. and I'm half asleep my head feels much better... boy...she sure is a creep. Suddenly my phone rings...what the "beep"!! "Oh, well what do you know..it's the creep! What did you just say to me? Say it again, are you teasing me all over again? You don't want to argue and fight... You want to kiss and make up TONIGHT!!! And you say you can't wait to come over and play. Well ALRIGHT!!! And now I hear myself saying with a smile... I'll see you in awhile my little lovey dovey crocodile." Jameslee@May10,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 05-11-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
ROFLMAO Oh man! That's the best part of arguing, is the making up! HOWEVER, the last couple of guys I've dated, have been the kind where you stay mad for DAYS at eachother! Argh! So I didn't get those kind of perks! LOL We always just went to bed "mad"....and OH, that's not good! Nothing like hanging onto your side of the mattress for dear life, so you don't fall off! (with your back to them of course!) hehehe I hate that! I've known couples who actually fight, just for an excuse to make up! Now that's cool!  This was a really fun poem, btw! I'll shut up now.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Femme...what a lovely response..sounds like you've been with a few crocodiles. James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Great title great poem...I guess it all worked out making up is more fun than going to the cinema.  |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
How fun and enjoyable! I enjoyed it! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Heehee,..this was great. Done it....love this. Yaaahhh,...this was a good one I need to visit this room more often...I think it's good for me to see some light after being in that dark room for so long,..although I have to say I love that place and all the poets in it |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for the chuckle James! Loved the title ... loved the last line ... loved the poem. Nice work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL!! we love ya when your EASY sweetbabyjames LOL this is adorable..as is the poet!! later sbj-gator jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you brian, lori, Spit Fire, Kit and Janet. I appreciate your wonderful comments. James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, James!  Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very good James! I'm glad that you two made back up. Nathan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Denise and Nate for your special comments. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Back to the top...James |
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