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Lovey dovey crocodile

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 05-11-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovey dovey crocodile

Now it's 7:00 p.m. and she didn't show
so off to the movies we won't go.
I call her up kind of pissed...
and the conversation goes something like this.
"Baby, I'm sorry to inform you but this is the way it be...
I have no time for you, if you have no time for me.
So don't act so surprised if I say I'm thru with you.  
Thats right!!!  Its over and done!!!
Did you think begging you to go to a movie is my idea of having fun?
So I guess I'll not see you later alligator.
Right now I'm gonna take a shower and go to bed
and clear all these silly disagreements out of my head."
Now it's 11:00 p.m. and I'm half asleep
my head feels much better...
boy...she sure is a creep.
Suddenly my phone rings...what the "beep"!!
"Oh, well what do you know..it's the creep!
What did you just say to me?  Say it again, are you teasing me all over again?
You don't want to argue and fight...
You want to kiss and make up TONIGHT!!!
And you say you can't wait to  come over and play.
Well ALRIGHT!!!
And now I hear myself saying with a smile...
I'll see you in awhile
my little lovey dovey crocodile."

Jameslee@May10,2000






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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 05-11-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

ROFLMAO  Oh man!  That's the best part of arguing, is the making up!  HOWEVER, the last couple of guys I've dated, have been the kind where you stay mad for DAYS at eachother!  Argh!  So I didn't get those kind of perks!  LOL  We always just went to bed "mad"....and OH, that's not good!  Nothing like hanging onto your side of the mattress for dear life, so you don't fall off!  (with your back to them of course!)  hehehe  I hate that! I've known couples who actually fight, just for an excuse to make up!  Now that's cool!     This was a really fun poem, btw!  I'll shut up now.  
JamesMichael
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2 posted 05-11-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Femme...what a lovely response..sounds like you've been with a few crocodiles.  James
brian madden
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3 posted 05-11-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Great title great poem...I guess it all worked out making up is more fun than going to the cinema.  
lorilockheart
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4 posted 05-11-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

How fun and enjoyable!  I enjoyed it!
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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SpitFire
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5 posted 05-11-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Heehee,..this was great.  Done it....love this.  Yaaahhh,...this was a good one I need to visit this room more often...I think it's good for me to see some light after being in that dark room for so long,..although I have to say I love that place and all the poets in it
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 05-11-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Thanks for the chuckle James!  Loved the title ... loved the last line ... loved the poem.  Nice work!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Janet Marie
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7 posted 05-11-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

LOL!!  

we love ya when your EASY sweetbabyjames LOL
this is adorable..as is the poet!!
later sbj-gator
jm
JamesMichael
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8 posted 05-12-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you brian, lori, Spit Fire, Kit and Janet.  I appreciate your wonderful comments. James
Denise
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9 posted 05-12-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is delightful, James!  

Denise
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 05-12-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This is very good James! I'm glad that you two made back up.

 Nathan
JamesMichael
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11 posted 05-13-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Denise and Nate for your special comments.   James
JamesMichael
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12 posted 08-01-2005 03:01 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Back to the top...James
 
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