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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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North Carolina

0 posted 2000-05-11 12:30 PM


All night long I pondered,
All day long I squandered my time,
Couldn't help it
Though I tried twenty four seven
not to think of thee.
I talked to lots of people
Just rolling right along
but right in the middle of the sentence
there was a pause because I almost said your name
Twenty four seven, I guess you think im in heaven
Seems like im in hell.
Such thoughts will make you rattled
it's as if i've lost my battle.
Must lay down and surrender
To these thoughts of you
that just keep coming
no matter what they'll come
so i'll just have to welcome them
to my mind
then maybe then between my mind and my heart there will be a union formed to radicate this thing.
Twenty four seven.



 

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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-05-11 12:48 PM


Hi
That was my problem for quite sometime. Its OK now. Just keep trying you'll have a control over yourself someday.
Sincerely
A_L

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-05-11 03:31 PM


24 7 can seem like a life sentence sometimes, but pain must never be allowed to win. I love the line,
"maybe then between my mind and my heart there will be a union formed to radicate this thing". Great poem.

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-05-11 05:06 PM


thanks brian and amazon, sometimes our minds really do take over. lol
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