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~Reiterated Legacy~

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devina
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0 posted 05-10-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

In reckless day and age, stone increments mark the way-
Adding fall upon fall of tears, to lace my placid path,
The Legacy continues to grow, as I weep soft and slow-
While this oblivion terminates the strength that I have.

Sightless I stager along, humming this bitter-sweet song-
Of majestic butterflies mourning, beneath the star-filled sky,
Sipping of passionless wind, praying for heartaches end-
I forfeit yet another tear, at my own exhausted denial.

Straying onward in destitution, befallen with resolution-
Dreaming of souls in sweet love- I do guiltily crave,
Bound by desire of Fate, I realize but a moment too late-
That such aspiration has lain the Legacy I walk today…




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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1 posted 05-11-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

SunSet

Dont ever fret the setting sun
on your journeys of passion and love
for any sad moment that dares to come
is just a pause in the years of love

Though every day has a setting sun
Every night a billion more will come

Parker......

devina, don't be sad, hugs hugs hugs... ok more...  
Sven
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2 posted 05-11-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Your legacy is not yet known gentle one. . . you have much to go and farther to see. . . one day you will find that which you seek. . . I know that it doesn't seem so, but you will. . .

I can feel the longing and the sadness in this one. . . take heart gentle spirit, you will discover your legacy. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

devina
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3 posted 05-11-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

James-thank you for that m'friend...always the sweetheart!! And I always need a hug from you dear!!

Sven-if you say so, then it must be true my dear friend...but I'm holding you to that!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Corazon
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4 posted 05-11-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

sounds like we walk the same road...and you could use some gentle hugs too (((hugs)))
love you girl  
RSEvans
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5 posted 05-12-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Two hugs up and a snap to the left.
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6 posted 05-12-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Have I ever let you down before?  I know about these things. . . trust me. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Skyfyre
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7 posted 05-12-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

I've walked this trail of bitter tears --
I know this journey well --
I've left my blood upon the stones
When, in despair, I fell ...

I shaped my armor out of Faith --
My blade was Destiny --
But such were shown of little worth
To thwart Inconstancy;

When every step upon this road
Comes closer to the fall,
Is not the wisest choice, in truth,
To never walk at all...?

Just one of those moods, hun ... liked the poem, it spoke to me.  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Nan
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Nicely done devina... and Sven's right - Listen to him..
brian madden
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9 posted 05-12-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

That was beautiful

"Dreaming of souls in sweet love- I do guiltily crave" I know this feeling all too well.

I am in awe at the beautiful of your words and saddened by the emotions. Every legacy grows out of pain but triumphs in hope.

  


  


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Janet Marie
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10 posted 05-12-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sightless I stager along, humming this bitter-sweet song-
Of majestic butterflies mourning, beneath the star-filled sky,
Sipping of passionless wind, praying for heartaches end-
I forfeit yet another tear, at my own exhausted denial.
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powerful poem D,
very strong emotional images...
your not even close to knowing your legacy...
your just getting warmed up.
take care girlie girl
jm

 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


serenity blaze
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11 posted 05-13-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Bittersweet and lovely words me 'sis'---hope all is well--have missed you much...LTY.
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