It's a truly magical thing to find another whom you know so much because your souls are of the same material..this poem is indeed magical..and lovely, and beautiful, and soft and delicate..I could go on for days.. Stunning work.
"Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
Between a laugh and a tear...
Butterflies....This is fabulous!! It is only when we understand ourselves and who we are, that we have the chance to understand others and who they are. Great writing!!! I love this piece. Hang in there, my friend!! You are a wonderful person...don't ever forget that. LW
Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith
Mirrors my sweet SS... once again...mirrors. and your looking oh so lovely tonight *smile* perfect butterfly... me thinks your muse is back...(literally) (think about it) LOL loves ya, jm
It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave
Sweet, sweet, touching poem, this poem made me feel sorry for the writer, it must have been quite difficult to write without going crazy . I loved it and really enjoyed the way that it flows . L.of.L. Tom .
Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
I don't know if I can put into words how beautiful I think this poem is. You've expressed that oneness, and soul connection in such a heartfelt, touching way. I have been looking for more of your work because I liked your others so much. You did not disappoint!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
James* Thank you First Knight* It's easy to say when there is no pressure and my time to this pehaps has already passed me by. Thank you for reading. Lori* J.M. told me to be sure that I read your work...due to the mirror effect of life...she was right I have found a connection in your words and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind reply and for reading.