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~When Morning Blooms~

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 05-10-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

Valleys drenched in silver-green
I glimpse within my dreams...
Lighted eyes caress the night
And beyond forever gleam...

Willow limbs embrace the wind
Whispering rosy rhymes...
A shadow's hint of what's to come
Grows thickly sweet with time...

His kiss dances, floating free
Upon some distant spray...
With aching need I search for him
Believing he'll come one day...

Reverie tinted in faded emerald
I enfold myself within...
And allow the breeze to softly flirt
And rush upon my skin...

I close my eyes, unlock my soul
Giving trust to destiny...
And pray that when morning blooms
It will be his face I see...




 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-10-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

*big dreamy sigh...*  This flowed so smoothly, like liquid silk....MY dreams don't even come halfway close to this, LOL.  I enjoyed this very much.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 05-10-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Wow! this is magnificent!! Your words float like that of a beautiful dream....one I wouldn't want to wake up from, but it also shows the longing for the one that we can only reach for in our dreams....very touching.  You have a gift   thanks for sharing it!
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3 posted 05-10-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

Beautiful poem!!!!!! I love the use of such vivid words.
Janet Marie
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4 posted 05-11-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

His kiss dances, floating free
Upon some distant spray...
With aching need I search for him
Believing he'll come one day...

Reverie tinted in faded emerald
I enfold myself within...
And allow the breeze to softly flirt
And rush upon my skin...

I close my eyes, unlock my soul
Giving trust to destiny...
And pray that when morning blooms
It will be his face I see...
---------------
K, this is exquisite,
it dances like a butterfly or feather in the wind.
such fragile longing laced with delicate desire. perfection of your poets pen.
take care, jm



 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


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5 posted 05-11-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
Total enchanment in your muse's offering

You play upon the morning dew
phrases fragrant with perfume
Delight of early morning roses
nightblooming jasmine quietly closes

And on his face ... your smile

~*Marge*~


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PhaerieChild
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6 posted 05-11-2000 03:53 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

*Sigh* I want some dreams like this. Lovely post Alwye.  

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 05-11-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful...need I say more?  
X Angel
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8 posted 05-11-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Alwye this is lovely   thanks for posting such a treasure.

~Heather
Alwye
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9 posted 05-11-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you all so much for replying, I appreciate it deeply.  

JM- A special thanks to you.  Having you reply to my work is quite an honor.  BTW, that's the first time anyone has ever called me 'K'..lol, I like it.  


 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
Dusk Treader
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10 posted 05-11-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

*hangs head in shame* Oh!  Such a thing for me to do as miss a poem like this for an entire day?  The shame is too much for me to bear!

A beautiful poem, Krista and I must agree with the others that it flows beautifully.  And if I am not guessing wrong it seems that this poem is about someone?  Excellent poem, milady!

The Jester,
Death


 Abrahm Simons

"You...
You are so special
You have the talent
To make me feel like Dirt" - Alice in Chains, "Dirt"
Dawn Eclipse
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11 posted 05-11-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Beautiful poem Krista.  Just beautiful.  I hope your dreams do come true, you deserve it.  The best people in the world deserve the best, and you are at the top of that list!!!  and the list only changes after number two... so you stuck there.  

Great poem, I liked it a lot.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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12 posted 05-11-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Enchanting, as always, Krista!

Denise
Alwye
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Dusk- Thank you, my gracious friend, for your kind comments.  

Cassers- Your dreams too deserve to come true.  And they will, my friend.  Thanks for being my rock to lean on and one of my best friends.  

Denise- Thank you so much!  


 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
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14 posted 05-12-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It's beautiful, Krista. The way you combine the colors with the thoughts is very striking. Lovely.
Corinne
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15 posted 05-13-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Like a soft oceanic lover.

Sweet.

Corinne
 
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