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Seymour Tabin
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    Common

The moon has spun,
Life abides.
A common mold.
A common sun.
Birds on high,
Worms below,
Blind and dumb,
Yet they greet,
A common sun.
A simple deed,
Shadows run,
But cannot hide,
They ever strive,
The simple need,
To eat and breath
And stay alive.

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1 posted 05-10-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
Wonderfully profound, my friend.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 05-10-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

To eat and breathe and stay alive under a common sun......sounds easy enough. Why is it so hard?

This is excellent writing, Sy.
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Seymour-


        This poem, in my opinion, defines our exsistence in this world. I'm going to remember this one for a while.

              -Tom
Janet Marie
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deep ... deep ... you are!!
words of wisdom...or is that worms of wisdom  
either way...superb ponderings sweet Sy.
later, jm
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Such truth rings clear in your words  
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Uncommonly wise, but I expect nothing less...
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 05-11-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge, Love ya too, Thanks.

Balladeer, Excellent from you is like getting the silver star. Thanks

Tom26, No better compliment could be said. Thanks

Janet, Thanks for the superb ponderings. *L*

Hoot, Thank you Hoot. *L*

Sunshine, You are always a ray of light to me. *L*
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Sy~ this is great! Makes me want to go play in the sunshine and it makes me feel connected to everything!Loved this.-SEA
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This is wonderful, the things in common. There is nothing common about your writings though. Thanks for the read.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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Seymour Tabin
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Sea,
A wonderful comment, thank you.

Wild Child,
Thank you for the great comment.
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You've deviated from your norm here, Sy - I like it - It becomes you ... very nicely I might add.. You've grown into almost as wonderful a poet as you are an artist - or was that almost as wonderful an artist as you are a poet??? ... either or..
Seymour Tabin
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Nan,
You are a love, I thank you for brinning this poem back to life. And I am honored by your comment. *L* Sy
 
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