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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Common The moon has spun, Life abides. A common mold. A common sun. Birds on high, Worms below, Blind and dumb, Yet they greet, A common sun. A simple deed, Shadows run, But cannot hide, They ever strive, The simple need, To eat and breath And stay alive. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Wonderfully profound, my friend. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
To eat and breathe and stay alive under a common sun......sounds easy enough. Why is it so hard? This is excellent writing, Sy. |
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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
Seymour- This poem, in my opinion, defines our exsistence in this world. I'm going to remember this one for a while. -Tom |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
deep ... deep ... you are!! words of wisdom...or is that worms of wisdom  either way...superb ponderings sweet Sy. later, jm |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such truth rings clear in your words  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Uncommonly wise, but I expect nothing less... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Love ya too, Thanks. Balladeer, Excellent from you is like getting the silver star. Thanks Tom26, No better compliment could be said. Thanks Janet, Thanks for the superb ponderings. *L* Hoot, Thank you Hoot. *L* Sunshine, You are always a ray of light to me. *L* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sy~ this is great! Makes me want to go play in the sunshine and it makes me feel connected to everything!Loved this.-SEA |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is wonderful, the things in common. There is nothing common about your writings though. Thanks for the read. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, A wonderful comment, thank you. Wild Child, Thank you for the great comment. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've deviated from your norm here, Sy - I like it - It becomes you ... very nicely I might add.. You've grown into almost as wonderful a poet as you are an artist - or was that almost as wonderful an artist as you are a poet??? ... either or..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, You are a love, I thank you for brinning this poem back to life. And I am honored by your comment. *L* Sy |
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