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Dark Angel
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0 posted 05-10-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


My Song


A sweet lullaby
     mellow song
euphonious joviality
    harshness free
you play
        for my heart
           and I sway to the
melody arising from
    within you

a thumping slow base
         beats from my chest
       in conjunction with
the musical arrangement
          of words
  
You,
  I sing with and
           dance with
    you are my song
                


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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1 posted 05-10-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Beautiful.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
WhtDove
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DA what a beautiful song  
Keep dancing       
Poet deVine
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This is beautiful...I love how you described your heartbeat!!!  
SpitFire
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4 posted 05-10-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Marvelous,..hehe.  You've captured this feeling with such greatness.  *Nice read for sure
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5 posted 05-10-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Oh, this was so beautiful... I loved it.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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6 posted 05-10-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
Beauteous song becomes you.
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 05-11-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

This is wonderful DA. . . it's true that our hearts sing the most wonderful song of all. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

TerryW
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Dark Angel~
     WOW!   All I can say is excellent writing!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Very beautiful, Dark Angel!  

Denise
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Temptress, thank you!  
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Angel, hey I will keep dancing thanks so much Hon.  
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Sharon thanks honey so much for your lovely reply.
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SpitFire, glad you enjoyed the read!!  
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Thank you LoveBug  
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Why thank you Marge, as always.  
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Sven yes they most certainly do....Thank you!  
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Terry WOW! so happy you liked!!  
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Denise, thanks so very much Hon  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Dark Angel
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 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-12-2000).]
Danny Holloway
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12 posted 05-12-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~very nice indeed~~~
thank you for responding to my caged bird!
best wishes,
dh
brian madden
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I enjoyed your song, it has a nice rhythm, I would sing along only I am tone deaf.
rene
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14 posted 05-12-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rene

top notch da, structure impressed me.
ps, was colderidge the life guy?
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