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What have you gotten into boy?

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REBECCA ALLYN
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since 05-09-2000
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Lima,Ohio


0 posted 05-10-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Did you know when you step foot in my life what you were getting yourself into?
Were you aware of the extent you would have to go?
You want me to trust you,you want me to rearrange my life
you are asking a lot of this fragile heart,what if I tell you no?
Were you positive that this was going to be simple?
You were just going to rush in and take me away?
I would automatically believe you and fall at your feet
even after all of this,do you really think you will stay?
It is sad to say that you get the sorry end of the deal
if you want me you need to repair all that I was left with
though you had nothing to do with it
with you it will silently sit
Are you a strong enough man?
Can you handle all of this baggage that comes along with the person I am?
Are you willing to sacrifice your sanity to be with me?
You will be knocked down more times than you will walk
You might as well crawl
There is a picture I'm painting,can you see?
Do you want me to fall in live with you?
Because I believe I am
Don't let me fall by myself


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lorilockheart
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since 05-06-2000
Posts 206
Alabama


1 posted 05-10-2000 08:00 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Rebecca,
You've done it again.  I like your style and the things you write about.  Keem 'em coming.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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REBECCA ALLYN
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Posts 91
Lima,Ohio


2 posted 05-10-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Lori,
You are such a sweetheart!!
Thanks again!


Lots Of Luv,
Becky
EagleOne
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since 03-07-2000
Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


3 posted 05-10-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

I am fast becoming a fan of your work. I agree with Lori, Keep ém coming!  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


4 posted 05-11-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A fascinating look into your mind and your heart.  James
PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon


5 posted 05-11-2000 02:17 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

I really can relate to this. Baggage is so hard to get rid of but with the right guy (or girl) it can be done. I hope he has really large shoulders  and I hope he falls with you.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland


6 posted 05-11-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Rebbeca!
It was nice. When you're love you really don't feel the pain or burden. Its a wonderful  realtionship where you'll find a magic cure for eveything. Just share it until your heart becomes heart and you'll just start loving forgetting all this pain. You'll find one. Just carry on until then.

Sincerely
A_L
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7 posted 05-11-2000 02:27 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Yeah...what they all said...keep 'em coming

All my love,
Jeffrey


 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

 
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