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REBECCA ALLYN
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since 05-09-2000
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0 posted 05-10-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Empower yourself over me
Tell me what it is I have to be
put me in my place and make me do as you say
Tell me everything has to be your way
push me around and tell me how to feel
make me cry then tell me it's no big deal
Lie to me time and time again
cheat on me and make me think it's my sin
Believe that you are everything and I am nothing
break me down and make me feel something
Promise to be ever faithful and true
please don't tell me eyes are beautiful
come up with something new
Smack me around and show me you're a man
make me fall in love with you and forget about my plan
Let me trust you fully,let me love you wholly
just give me a reason to be with you
and I promise to make you fall too


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lorilockheart
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1 posted 05-10-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Yes, it's me again... powerful, deep, emotional, intense..............

You're good.

Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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REBECCA ALLYN
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2 posted 05-10-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Lori,
Thank you so much
you are too kind!!!


Lots Of Love,
Becky
Nan
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3 posted 05-10-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Becky, I normally wouldn't respond to a poem such as this because of its masochistic nature.  I do feel compelled to tell you that I hope this is a hypothetical situation for you... if not, you'll be setting yourself up for some rather intensive and potentially dangerous life situations...
Poet deVine
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4 posted 05-10-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Becky, I just replied to another poem of yours...this one disturbs me...I do hope this is not your life you are describing! You are a worthy person and should not remain in this kind of relationship...  
REBECCA ALLYN
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5 posted 05-10-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

I want every one to understand that I do love myself and I am not in a bad relationship. I just have to write what ever comes out of my head or I will go nuts!!
Do you guys understand?
EagleOne
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6 posted 05-10-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Firstly, I think most of us here understand.   Secondly this is indeed an intense piece of work. Keep writing!

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 05-10-2000).]
Poet deVine
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7 posted 05-10-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Thanks for clearing it up Becky....  
 
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