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0 posted 2000-05-10 05:13 PM



Softly touch my face
look into my eyes, as if you'd get lost
give me some affection
how much could it cost?

Stroke your hand
down my hair
that's one way
to show you care

Whisper sweet words
into my ear
tell me I'm beautiful
I really need to hear

Kiss me~
like you'll die without more
Kiss me~
until our lips are sore

How do you love me?
Please count the ways
make love to me slowly
as if we had days

Hold me close
as we lay down to sleep
life without affection
deppression swallows me deep.
-SEA-

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1 posted 2000-05-10 05:17 PM


YOUR BEAUTIFUL!!
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2 posted 2000-05-10 05:18 PM


Ohhh I understand this well. WOW. I have/am/will be there forever it seems. Great rendition of a timeless feeling..a feeling that somehow in life's shuffle true love got lost.
I like this muchly  
~Heather

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3 posted 2000-05-10 05:19 PM


Insect~ thank you for that! -SEA
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4 posted 2000-05-10 05:20 PM


Heather~ thank you, love is not lost, just feeling a little ignored.-SEA
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5 posted 2000-05-10 05:23 PM


We should get out the Bloodhounds and track that sucker down.  

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6 posted 2000-05-10 07:12 PM


Well, I e-mailed this to him at work.....he should be home in about an hour and a half....hmmmmmmm.......guess I'll have to wait and see what happens. Here's hoping. -SEA
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7 posted 2000-05-10 07:33 PM


I'm feeling that for sure!!
Beautiful poem!!


Lots Of Luv,
Becky

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