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Thoughts of you

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msstt
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0 posted 05-10-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for msstt   Email msstt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for msstt

The hurt and the pain.
With each and every word I read.
Feeling I should hang by a thread.
And I did read and read.
To only feel the dread.
As if I were loosing my head.

The thought I was loosing you.
Only made me sad and blue.
And all of my thoughts fealt so untrue.
If only I could see through.
The thoughts of you.


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brian madden
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1 posted 05-11-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

An interesting poem, I really loved the first verse, is it about reading a poem you wrote for someone, about feelings you one had and the second verse is about how those feelings have changed? Am I missing the point? anyway great poem, look forward to reading more from you.  
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2 posted 05-11-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

I like this, liked the ending...great poem
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