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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2000-05-10 03:18 PM


Complete nonsense is mostly what I write
for fun then I just drop right out of sight
Just once I'd like more time and then I'd stay
but then I might not know quite what to say

There is much more that I have yet to learn
the dues I've paid are not what I have earned
To understand that which I talk about
observe these words absurd and filled with doubt

In rhyme my works are most often displayed
results of this sometimes leave me dismayed
For some this comes much easier than I
at times I wonder why I even try


And then there may yet be some hope for me
I guess that I'll just have to wait and see



© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
msstt
Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23
Huntington,Ind
1 posted 2000-05-10 03:48 PM


That was really great.And yes you will see.Good writting.

Tricia

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-05-10 10:05 PM


Another good one, Dr.Moose! I wish you had time to write and post more!

Denise

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 2000-05-10 10:20 PM


Hey, for a moose, you're great!! How do ya punch the keyboard with those hooves????
Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
4 posted 2000-05-11 03:51 PM


msstt,
many thanks again

d,
'tis the bane of my existence

Deer
you oughtta see the size of my ... keyboard

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-05-11 05:17 PM


How true dr. moose, but have you ever wondered if you didn't try, then you just wouldn't know and you wouldn't have   got such an strange reply. lol seriously though poetry is so awesome and sometimes takes you even when you want to let go .Kind of grasp on to you. Ever noticed how your entertwined together, a complete connection. Keep it up im sure you'll see there's a poet in everyone even me.
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