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Goodbye

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aurora
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0 posted 05-10-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for aurora   Email aurora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aurora

Your warm touch
Your gentle embrace
Took control of my heart
Threatening to never let go
Till that one day,
My dreams were shattered
And you were gone.
Now all that is left are the memories
And the glimpse of your eyes
That still pierce my heart.
The painful longing
For your soft touch
That sent me into a world of dreams
And ultimate heaven.
I am saying goodbye to a love
That will never again be
Though my heart is still longing.


[This message has been edited by aurora (edited 05-10-2000).]
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Parker
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1 posted 05-10-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

aurora, .... one of my favorite poem names, you have. This was a great first post. Welcome to Passions, our home is your home, and i'm just another romantic nut in the fray.

Parker
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with you


2 posted 05-10-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Aurora~WELCOME!! Oh this is so lovely....makes me sigh!!-SEA
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3 posted 05-10-2000 02:58 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Welcome to a new heaven Passions and fly with the rest of the poet angels.
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4 posted 05-10-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Aurora, welcome to Passions. . .

This was a wonderful first poem. . . it's hard to let go, and yet still hold on, isn't it?  

And don't let us Romantic nuts scare you. . .we don't bite. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


5 posted 05-10-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Welcome to Passions, Aurora! This is a lovely first post, you express your emotion beautifully.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
REBECCA ALLYN
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6 posted 05-10-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

I know exactly how you feel!!
Hold on it only gets better
from here on out

Becky
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Nice poem.Welcome to passion!!!!!!!
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8 posted 05-10-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Great work here.  
Welcome.  


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
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9 posted 05-10-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Aurora--

welcome to passions! this was written with a beautiful type of sadness. i hope things get better for you, and through your writing you can begin to heal. i can tell you the family here at passions are a big help in that category.

take care and i look forward to reading more from you.

~amy~

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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