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SpitFire
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0 posted 05-10-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SpitFire

~You~

You itch
I scratch
you spill
I clean
you fall
I hug
you cry
I wipe
you sick
I fix
you hungry
I feed
you sleep
I watch.

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1 posted 05-10-2000 02:41 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

This is beautiful. It makes me think of children and part of the day they may go through.
To watch them sleep gives a parent a wonderful feeling. A parent always wants to be there for  their children  and this poem says it.
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2 posted 05-10-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

SpitFire~ as a Mom, the automatic responses to each need is what I can relate to so well,3 times over! I really like this one.....she says while printing!! -SEA
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~Thank you both for sweet replies...I don't have any children yet but I take care of them and can relate   I think that when I originally wrote it it was for someone I love lots.
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SpitFire,
Excellent, 24 karat gold.
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5 posted 05-10-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for msstt   Email msstt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for msstt

Very good here.It does make me think so much of my four little ones.

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6 posted 05-10-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Wonderful, wonderful poem!  
I love children, needy souls that they are!
~Heather
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