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Touch Me |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Touch Me Touch me with your love, let me feel it on my skin my soul is begging for your song please let me deep within Touch me with your love, show my heart just how to care breathe your promises in my ear please whisper you will be there Touch me with your love, rain your kisses down on me brush your lips across my being please help my mind to see Touch me with your love, let me spin inside your fire wrap your flame around me please dance with my desire Touch me with your love, protect me from all harm spread your warmth through my soul please sway me with your charms Touch me with your love, my mind and body have opened the doors my heart and soul are ready for you I am completely and forever yours. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh yea...somebody touch me too PLEEEZE... wow very sensual poem here... very nice read...VERY!! well written and most enjoyed  take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BobbyCat~ Absolutely beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Janet Marie & Marge~ thank you so very much for your kind compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed.  Bobbycat =^..^= |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Bobby! This was beautiful. A_L |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
A.L.~ Thank you for your kind words. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Bobbycat - this is superb! Tender emotions, beautifully expressed. Keep up the good work!  Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Thanks, Troy; glad you enjoyed. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
What beautiful emotions! I love this. So sensual with a touch of innocence. Lovely post. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
WildChild~ wow, "innocence"....I never thought of it that way. I had to go back and read my own poem again, and you know what? I think you're right....I can see where the innocence angle comes into play. Thank you for bringing another perspective into it. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOW!! this poem TOUCHED me...this was awesome! really loved how it all flowed together...very good. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
This poem is beautiful. It is so smoothly written. I can't wait to read more. |
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Bacardi747 New Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 4 |
This piece was extraordinarily moving....i only wish i knew the person lucky enough to be on the receiving end of this....much oblige to you.... Trent |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Amy, CSwtThng~ thank you for very much. I tried to make this flow as smoothly as I could; I'm glad it worked. Trent~ believe me, the person receiving this is more than deserving of it. Thank you for reading. Bobbycat =^..^= |
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