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bobbycat
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0 posted 05-10-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bobbycat

Touch Me

Touch me with your love,
let me feel it on my skin
my soul is begging for your song
please let me deep within

Touch me with your love,
show my heart just how to care
breathe your promises in my ear
please whisper you will be there

Touch me with your love,
rain your kisses down on me
brush your lips across my being
please help my mind to see

Touch me with your love,
let me spin inside your fire
wrap your flame around me
please dance with my desire

Touch me with your love,
protect me from all harm
spread your warmth through my soul
please sway me with your charms

Touch me with your love,
my mind and body have opened the doors
my heart and soul are ready for you
I am completely and forever yours.

© Copyright 2000 Christina L. Petrosky - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-10-2000 03:36 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh yea...somebody touch me too PLEEEZE...
wow very sensual poem here...
very nice read...VERY!!
well written and most enjoyed  
take care, jm


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-10-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BobbyCat~
Absolutely beautiful.
~*Marge*~


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bobbycat
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3 posted 05-10-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Janet Marie & Marge~ thank you so very much for your kind compliments.  I'm glad you enjoyed.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
amazon_lover
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4 posted 05-11-2000 01:16 AM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Bobby!
This was beautiful.

A_L
bobbycat
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5 posted 05-11-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

A.L.~  Thank you for your kind words.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
hsystems
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6 posted 05-11-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Bobbycat - this is superb!  Tender emotions, beautifully expressed.  Keep up the good work!


Troy

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bobbycat
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7 posted 05-11-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Thanks, Troy; glad you enjoyed.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
PhaerieChild
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8 posted 05-11-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

What beautiful emotions! I love this. So sensual with a touch of innocence. Lovely post.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


bobbycat
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9 posted 05-11-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

WildChild~  wow, "innocence"....I never thought of it that way.  I had to go back and read my own poem again, and you know what?  I think you're right....I can see where the innocence angle comes into play.  Thank you for bringing another perspective into it.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
Aimster
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10 posted 05-11-2000 03:17 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

WOW!! this poem TOUCHED me...this was awesome! really loved how it all flowed together...very good.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
CSwtThng
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11 posted 05-11-2000 03:41 AM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

This poem is beautiful. It is so smoothly written. I can't wait to read more.
Bacardi747
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12 posted 05-11-2000 03:41 AM       View Profile for Bacardi747   Email Bacardi747   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bacardi747

This piece was extraordinarily moving....i only wish i knew the person lucky enough to be on the receiving end of this....much oblige to you....

Trent

 
bobbycat
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13 posted 05-11-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Amy, CSwtThng~ thank you for very much.  I tried to make this flow as smoothly as I could; I'm glad it worked.  

Trent~ believe me, the person receiving this is more than deserving of it.  Thank you for reading.  

Bobbycat =^..^=

 
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