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lucky
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0 posted 2000-05-09 11:44 PM




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Martie
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1 posted 2000-05-10 01:06 AM


lucky, now you've gone and made me cry...and I thought I had them under lock and key for awhile...Hugs!
lucky
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2 posted 2000-05-10 02:51 AM


Oh my sweet Martie,

You know my prayers are ever with you. Rosemary is so amazed at my writing and what I can put on paper as I see you are also. I feel your tender heart. So Much Much Love forever, "Lucky" the keeper.


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-05-10 11:55 AM


Lucky,
Wonderful paint, wonderful lines, enjoyed.

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-05-10 12:00 PM


Simply breath-taking Lucky ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

lucky
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5 posted 2000-05-11 01:43 AM


Martie,

Gone and made you cry..? I thought you were under control... Hugs!

Seymour Tabin

I've been trying a different brush stoke, glad you enjoyed.

Kit

Best wishes to you also.

Thank you all once again.


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

REBECCA ALLYN
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6 posted 2000-05-11 05:43 AM


My favorite poems are the ones that paint such clear images!!!great work!!!
Very sweet!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky

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7 posted 2000-05-11 07:10 AM


Lucky~
You do paint the path of tears so eloquently.
ANOTHER beautiful render.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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8 posted 2000-05-12 03:23 PM


Becky,

Glad you liked the paint job, I tried a different brand this time, guess it turned out a little better.

Marge,

Don't tell me I pulled out a little tear. Next time I'll send along a little tissue, Bless you.



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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9 posted 2000-05-12 03:33 PM


I know, sweetheart, I know.  It's so hard to see past the mountain of pain.  I'm so glad you can still turn, reach out for life, and smile.  You're a brave man with a heart of gold.

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