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lucky
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0 posted 2000-05-09 11:15 PM


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1 posted 2000-05-10 05:00 AM


Lucky~
You 'paint' words that mesmerize.
Truly a pondering point.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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Idaho
2 posted 2000-05-11 01:48 AM


Marge,

You have such a gracious haert. Thank you..!


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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3 posted 2000-05-12 04:22 PM


I just had to bump this one, honey!  The loving words "she was a rose that I’ve longed for & worn for O these many years" sing to me like the sweetest lovesong - and I also love the phrase "autumns lie beneath my knees" - there's something magical and haunting about that.  Time.  I'm fascinated when you write of time.

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