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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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1 more from little redwriter.. Please tell her she's good.. (she won't believe me, i'm just her mom!) (grin) MY LIFE My life is like the world spinning round and round with a whirlwind of emotions coming at me with the speed of a rocket in space I have more friends than insects on this planet My feelings for others run deeper than the deepest oceans any yet, in all this confusion My life is like a wave flowing softly with the wind at my back But, I'm also a bottle on the wave Going wherever fate decides to lead me Kathryn Carew copyright 2000 |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW!!! This one is absolutely beautiful. Such words of wisdom from such a young soul. You sure she's only twelve?  All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hello again Kathryn -- I would say this was "very good" for a 15 year old. So for a twelve year old, it must be excellent ---) Trust in your mom --- Keep writing. This poem shows a very intelligent young lady -- who knows that life takes it twists and turns ---) netswan |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...I am very impressed. Such depth here and sort of like a comfortable feeling of who you are...THAT is very nice. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
She's reading these as they come in....! Thank you all for such generous input.. you're really making our (my) day.. If she keeps writing like this, I'll never need amother's day gift.. (smile) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathryn~  The message in the bottle says, 'You are a budding poetess ... !' I know ... I wrote it and tossed it to you ! Keep writing, hon. Throw your poetic messages to others to enjoy. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have a lovely talent for painting pictures with words Kathryn ... and such beautiful thoughts. I believe your "fate" has led you to poetry. Keep it up! Best wishes, /Kit |
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