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redwriter1
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0 posted 05-09-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

1 more from little redwriter..

Please tell her she's good.. (she won't believe me, i'm just her mom!) (grin)

MY LIFE

My life is like the world
spinning round and round
with a whirlwind of emotions
coming at me with the speed of a
rocket in space

I have more friends than insects
on this planet
My feelings for others run deeper
than the deepest oceans
any yet,
in all this confusion

My life is like a wave
flowing softly with the wind at my back
But, I'm also a bottle on the wave
Going wherever fate decides to lead me

Kathryn Carew copyright 2000

© Copyright 2000 redwriter1 - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 05-09-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

WOW!!!

This one is absolutely beautiful. Such words of wisdom from such a young soul.

You sure she's only twelve?  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

netswan
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Hello again Kathryn --  I would say
this was "very good" for a 15 year old.
So for a twelve year old, it must be
excellent ---)

Trust in your mom --- Keep writing.

This poem shows a very intelligent young
lady -- who knows that life takes it
twists and turns ---)  

netswan
SpitFire
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3 posted 05-09-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Wow,...I am very impressed.  Such depth here and sort of like a comfortable feeling of who you are...THAT is very nice.
redwriter1
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4 posted 05-09-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

She's reading these as they come in....!

Thank you all for such generous input.. you're really making our (my) day..

If she keeps writing like this, I'll never need amother's day gift.. (smile)
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Kathryn~


The message in the bottle says,
'You are a budding poetess ... !'
I know ... I wrote it and tossed it to you !
Keep writing, hon.
Throw your poetic messages to others to enjoy.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 05-10-2000 06:10 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You have a lovely talent for painting pictures with words Kathryn ... and such beautiful thoughts.  I believe your "fate" has led you to poetry.  Keep it up!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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