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Little redwriter would like input (please)

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redwriter1
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0 posted 05-09-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for redwriter1

My daughter is 12 and any comments you would like to make to her would be so appreciated!!


The Spring Fairies


They dart around
These little fairies
Bringing plants into the world
Fighting over who gets to make the
next bud bloom

They fly so fast and high you can
barely make out their figures
They fly around the world,
going higher and higher,

Until they soar back down,
To finish their work,
And when their tired,
they're really tuckered out,

They fall asleep in their
little dandelions
Until next spring,
When their needed again


Kathyrn Carew copyright 2000

*** mom is soo proud! (grin)


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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 05-09-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Sounds like "Little Redwriter" will be a great song writer one day soon.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

redwriter1
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2 posted 05-09-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

Thank you Jeffrey!!... (and thanks for all your help yesterday on my lyrics) you're a real sweetheart of the truest nature.  

Kay-lynn
netswan
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Sweet Poem Kathryn -- Your mom should
be proud!

Thanks for sharing -- and reminding about
the fairies and how they work so hard
in the spring and summer -----well --
will knit some itty bitty blankets for
their winter snooze ---)  to match
the color of dandelions as they snuggle
in

netswan
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~Simply marvelous...really,..this was great,...and in perfect time for where I am    A talented little bud,...in the process of blooming...hooray!!!
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5 posted 05-09-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is great, Kay-Lynn! Your daughter is talented....guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Tell her to keep writing...that;s the best way to keep getting better....and I'd like to see more of her refreshing poetry.

Thanks for the URL. Magnificent!!!
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6 posted 05-10-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kathryn~
Enchanting !

May the Faeries of Delight
light your night with dreams.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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What a perfectly sweet poem for spring!  Kathryn should keep up the great work ... her talents are blossoming!

Best wishes,
/Kit
lorilockheart
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8 posted 05-10-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

What a talented family!  Your daughter is quite creative and inspirational.  And she can only improve!  Wow, I can't imagine how wonderful her poems will be then.  
Both of them I've read here are definitely enjoyable.

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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