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My Life

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Striving Poet
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0 posted 05-09-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Striving Poet   Email Striving Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Striving Poet

now all ya'll who think you know me
you dont
my life has been one big dream
a dream that has been flushed out the scene
just have had alot of **** on my mind
wanting to die
fly high
i'm telling you this while i got these mixed thoughts in my system
i've had so many chances
but i ****ing missed them
i got so many great things in my life
but i dont know how to thank them
this feeling is like bein cut wit a knife
i know this sounds like some mushy ****
but deal with it
i need to get this off my chest
before i do something stupid
causin the police to make an arrest
this **** is killing me
so many people decieveing me
people always ****in tripping
so now i'm going start flipping
filling haters heads with lead
shootin their ass dead
please god help
i'm losin my mind
i cant cope
with wanting to die all da time
now maybe i'm exxagerating
makin my problems sound devistating
but there are more kids that know i'm goin crazy
my family tellin me i'm ****ing lazy
well **** them
all them
they cant feel my pain
my mind is leaving
i think i'm going insane
so if u think you know me
what do you think now
Leave me the **** alone
This is is my life

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netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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1 posted 05-09-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Well Striving Poet - welcome to passions.
Sorry about the life portrayed in this poem.
Sounds miserable and sad -----whoever it
is about - they are the only ones to
take the positive steps to change it.

netswan

Tia
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since 05-05-2000
Posts 40
massachusetts


2 posted 05-09-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

this poem sounds like you're describing my life too.

Tia

 I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be
 
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