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Striving Poet New Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 1 |
now all ya'll who think you know me you dont my life has been one big dream a dream that has been flushed out the scene just have had alot of **** on my mind wanting to die fly high i'm telling you this while i got these mixed thoughts in my system i've had so many chances but i ****ing missed them i got so many great things in my life but i dont know how to thank them this feeling is like bein cut wit a knife i know this sounds like some mushy **** but deal with it i need to get this off my chest before i do something stupid causin the police to make an arrest this **** is killing me so many people decieveing me people always ****in tripping so now i'm going start flipping filling haters heads with lead shootin their ass dead please god help i'm losin my mind i cant cope with wanting to die all da time now maybe i'm exxagerating makin my problems sound devistating but there are more kids that know i'm goin crazy my family tellin me i'm ****ing lazy well **** them all them they cant feel my pain my mind is leaving i think i'm going insane so if u think you know me what do you think now Leave me the **** alone This is is my life |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well Striving Poet - welcome to passions. Sorry about the life portrayed in this poem. Sounds miserable and sad -----whoever it is about - they are the only ones to take the positive steps to change it. netswan |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
this poem sounds like you're describing my life too. Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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