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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2000-05-09 08:23 PM





I’ve got a secret I can’t share
Not just now, anyway
But it’s so cool that I think
You’ll be blown away

It’s bigger than a breadbox
smaller than a chiffonier
I’ve waited for this moment
For just about a year!

I can’t tell you what it is
Even if you beg me to say
But when the time arrives
We’ll celebrate the day!




[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 05-09-2000).]

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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-05-09 08:27 PM


I know your secret, but I'm not telling  
LoveBug
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2 posted 2000-05-09 08:27 PM


I've not been here for long
I think... well, should I say
That I am really thinking
That... nah, I shouldn't say

(but it rhymes with say!)


AM I RIGHT, AM I RIGHT????< !signature-->

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[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 05-09-2000).]

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-05-09 08:29 PM


If you think you've guessed this rhyme
send me the answer, only online
via ICQ or mail
I'll tell you if you're on the trail!

WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-05-09 09:54 PM


I know what it is....
I know what it is....
hahahaha...

Jester59701
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5 posted 2000-05-09 10:55 PM


Hmmmm ? Oh! No? Hmmmmmm ? Oh yeah! Naw! Hmmmm! Oh well, I'll just wait!
Michael
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6 posted 2000-05-09 10:57 PM


I know it - I know it
But don't worry, I won't blow it!!!

LOL

Indeed, we will celebrate though...

Michael

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7 posted 2000-05-09 11:00 PM


*scratches head* lol....i got NO clue...but can't wait till i find out  

Amy  

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wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-05-09 11:01 PM


ok goin to the online semantic rhymin dictionary and lookin up "say" well um that stinks thats quite a popular ryhme there um i better have not been thrown off track!!!
Pepper
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9 posted 2000-05-09 11:13 PM


I have some thoughts on this ... and emailed you, Sharon, to see if I'm on track ....
I'm dying of curiosity ... LOL

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10 posted 2000-05-10 12:13 PM


Your Honor, I barely know this woman!!!
Poet deVine
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11 posted 2000-05-10 01:06 AM




I've had to laugh at all this guessing
(no I'm not having a little blessing!)
and though I wish it were true
I'm not being published yet, it's true..

So keep them coming, I'll answer all
and if you think real hard
you'll find the passion I've discovered
and I'll announce it with a card!


wayoutwalt
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12 posted 2000-05-10 01:09 AM


for just about a year is it a birthday and oman yuh so old the years gotta be bigger than a breadbox   o im kiddin   o craps wasnt supposed to guess durnit...i think it is something else..

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13 posted 2000-05-10 01:18 AM


ME!!! ME!!!  ME!!!!  I KNOW!!!!

Well, at least I think I know. . . LOL. . . *getting the hats and balloons ready!!*

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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14 posted 2000-05-10 05:20 PM


Good for you!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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Sunshine
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15 posted 2000-05-10 05:24 PM


Edition #3 is ready for press?
Nah, that'd be too easy to guess...

but in the meantime, Ms DeVine
e-mail me for you're off-line...

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16 posted 2000-05-10 10:16 PM


I can't wait for the celebration!!

Denise

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17 posted 2000-05-11 09:51 AM


As to what it could be, I have no clue
But it makes you smile, so I'm glad for you
You deserve reasons to celebrate...
Ole curious here will just have to wait. *G*

Kit McCallum
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18 posted 2000-05-11 01:16 PM


Ohhhhhh ... you're a tease ... and I'm clueless! Loved the poem though!

I'll await in quiet anticipation,
/Kit

PericolosoAmore
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19 posted 2000-05-11 01:51 PM


AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. This is frustrating, this thought is probably way of the line but, r u getting maried??????? is so well done....
P.A.

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Do you hate the way you feel,
-bush-

RainbowGirl
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20 posted 2000-05-11 02:00 PM


I have no clues whatsoever so I'll wait to see what happens..*g*...Hope you enjoy it though..

HUSG

Danny Holloway
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21 posted 2000-05-11 02:01 PM


uh....um....what is a Chiffonier???
your getting a Miata!!??!!??!!??!!??
Whatever it is, you seem very excited.
since your so "deVine", i hope it's something very special!!


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


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