i for one really like your work...and i know my fellow friends here at passions would never intentionally make someone feel bad about their work. we all are here to write poetry, to learn from another, and to grow and mature as individuals and as poets. it is my belief that anyone who has enough guts to post his/her poetry online is a true winner. i believe that everyone here makes up the passions family...and that we all connect on different levels, however connect we do...just the same . as for this piece, i thought it was beatiful. she is a lucky girl and so are you...sometimes all we need is one more chance. i hope this is yours.
~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~