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Forever ... And A Day Or Two
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Forever ... And A Day Or Two |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Forever ... And A Day Or Two ~*Marge Tindal*~ God in all His wisdom gave me a love to keep He sent your love to me within my heart to bury deep I cherish the love you give even more than the air I breathe Forever we will be one of spirit to you alone I will cleave I thank the stars above for each moment that we share Know that you are dear to me Know that I care Always in the knowledge you are a miracle come true I'll love you until forever and then a day or two ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lucky is the one on the receiving end of your love Marge ... this is lovely, as reflected in your person. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Precious sentiments, Marge...this is so sweet! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"...a day or two" is ice cream to the cake, dear Marge! And I am sure you would do just that...with the right one! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, I will love this poem forever... and a day or two! (Ok, that was corny, hehehe)  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This felt like something written to your child (in part)...it was wonderful, sweet, and tender..all the ingredients to an awesome poem  ~X~ [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Such precious sentiments! Very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Wasn't that sweet for Marge to write this to me?....Yassee?.....Just cuz I'm a Toerag doesn't mean I don't attract fine ladies with great wisdom and talent?....LOL |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
--Marge as always, your work is superior! this was very beautiful to read. elgance sentiments to say the least, were gracefully written in every stanza and verse. your best writing(in my opinion) is in a poem such as this. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Awwwwwww ! I'm on the receiving end of an awful lot of wonderful love. Claire~ Thank you, hon. Sunshine~ OH, yeah ! LoveBug~ I'll settle for you loving it for today. For all of our today's laid end to end ... stretch into forever. XAngel~ Interesting take ... and you're right. For children take us into forever. Denise~ I'm glad you liked. TOE~ You DO attract fine ladies. OF COURSE this was written with you in mind. LOVE IT ! You are such a refreshing look at today. Amy~ Thank you. I like the 'softer side' of me too. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is a beautiful concept Marge...not JUST forever...but a day or two as well!! *Goes good with a cup of coffee too* Love Ya!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, ANY poem about your cleavage gets an A in my book!!!!!! That, plus the fact it is a wonderful poem with beautiful thoughts, of course.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Oh, YEAH ! A cup of hot, hot coffee with cream and lots and lots of love. Mmmmmm ! Mmmmmm ! Balladeer~ I wish we had sound activation here. You would hear me giggling. You are sooooo imaginatively WONDERFUL. I'm still smiling ... you have that wonderful 'way about you'. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: Love the wording.. and ROFL, well, if I could @ Bal...LOLHUSG |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ Bravo! This has very strong meaning to me. I know you understand, reading my work as of late. I love the way you express your feelings. Thank you - you once again have brightened up my day a little more! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Rainbow....Everyone laughs at Balladeer when he's not around yanno?...LOL |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Marge You're a great person and I love everything you've said and I'm sure the personwhom you love is very lucky. (((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))) A_L |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, love like that is always a good thing |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Forever and a day or two - it just keeps going on. Really sweet and touching. I enjoyed it! Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ Hello, sweetness. Gentle hugs for you. A soft chuckle at that Balladeer is A-okay ! He keeps me in 'stitches'. TerryW~ I do understand. Hugs, sweetie. TOE~ You're a loveable scamp. AmazonLover~ 'Tis I who is the lucky one. Thank you. Hoot~ Hi hon. Thanks. Lori~ So very sweet, yes. It just has to continue beyond eternity. Thanks to all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, Marge, you are so prolifically gifted! You ought to be making tons of money on greeting cards of ALL kinds. Your poems are outstandingly better than almost all those that I buy. And you seem to write them effortlessly, with an inborn talent. ~ ~ ~ This is exactly how I feel about my husband, and I could never have put it better. I'm keeping it, and I pointed it out to him as such! You're a treasure! |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
I loved this Marge! That last line is just perfect!!! ~Kellsue  Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ Well, I sure thank you for that ! Now that you brought it up .. I've got this plan ... print mine out ... and send me the $$$ ! I'll even give you a discount ! ! ! I LIKE THIS IDEA ! KellSue~ Thank you for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet sentiments Marge. A perfect message to someone you hold dear. Must be someone special. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I know you wrote this for Toe!(LOL) He's an inspiration for us ladies!  This is beautiful, and yes, you should be working for Hallmark. -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ok. . . what is this now. . . first Janet and then Gen and now you Marge? It would seem that Spring has sprung in the lives (and hearts) of many people here!! A great poem Marge. . . love the words. . . "Forever and a day or two". Excellent!! ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*sigh*...wonderful, Marge!! This is a beautiful poem. I can't say I think it is your best cos I believe (very strongly) that all of your poems are your "best"!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge, Great poem!! It is so nice to see someone has inspired such devotion and feelings in you. You are a very special person indeed. Love this one....all of it!!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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msstt Junior Member
since 2000-05-03
Posts 23Huntington,Ind |
This was so beautiful.GREAT JOB Tricia |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thank you, hon. Yes, very special always. SEA~ Ahhhh - yes ... the TOE MAN ! Hallmark, huh? Sending resume ! Sven~ My dear man, don't need Spring for love ... it fits every season of my heart. Thank you. ESP~ My little, Lizzie~ ... you're such a sweet inspiration to me. Thank you. LoneWolf~ Thank you, lady. So glad you like it. Tricia~ Thank you and welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh and an easy one you are to love Marge. I am in envy of the recipient of such love you give A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David~ Thank you my loving friend. I am the recipient also of love from wonderful people such as yourself. We can only give back ... that which we receive. Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
AWWWWWWWWWW someones in love. And so am I so I know what you mean. P.A. Do you feel the way you hate, Do you hate the way you feel, -bush- |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
So sweet this one I read CocoBaci |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peri~ Thank you ... I've been in 'love' all my life ! CocoBaci~ Glad you liked. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okay,I got wedding bells ringing from pages of memories from this one. Isn't it funny how just when you may have faltering hope in the magic of marriage, something happens to boost your faith back up again? Its wonderful. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
How wonderful to love so much, and forever! This must be a very special person..... Big Smiles  I seem to remember this feeling a bit now... thanks for the reminder. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ I'm pleased that it stirred memories ... and perhaps renewed your faith in love. Thank you. Irie~ I'm so glad that you enjoyed this presentation of my heart. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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