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Forever ... And A Day Or Two

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Marge Tindal
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Forever ... And A Day Or Two
~*Marge Tindal*~

God in all His wisdom
gave me a love to keep
He sent your love to me
within my heart to bury deep

I cherish the love you give
even more than the air I breathe
Forever we will be one of spirit
to you alone I will cleave

I thank the stars above
for each moment that we share
Know that you are dear to me
Know that I care

Always in the knowledge
you are a miracle come true
I'll love you until forever
and then a day or two





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-09-2000 08:11 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Lucky is the one on the receiving end of your love Marge ... this is lovely, as reflected in your person.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Precious sentiments, Marge...this is so sweet!

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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"...a day or two" is ice cream to the cake, dear Marge!  And I am sure you would do just that...with the right one!
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4 posted 05-09-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Marge, I will love this poem forever... and a day or two! (Ok, that was corny, hehehe)  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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5 posted 05-09-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

This felt like something written to your child (in part)...it was wonderful, sweet, and tender..all the ingredients to an awesome poem  
~X~

[This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 05-09-2000).]
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Such precious sentiments! Very lovely, Marge!

Denise
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7 posted 05-09-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Wasn't that sweet for Marge to write this to me?....Yassee?.....Just cuz I'm a Toerag doesn't mean I don't attract fine ladies with great wisdom and talent?....LOL
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8 posted 05-09-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

--Marge

as always, your work is superior! this was very beautiful to read. elgance sentiments to say the least, were gracefully written in every stanza and verse. your best writing(in my opinion) is in a poem such as this.  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Kit~
Awwwwwww !  I'm on the receiving end of an awful lot of wonderful love.

Claire~
Thank you, hon.

Sunshine~
OH, yeah !  

LoveBug~
I'll settle for you loving it for today.
For all of our today's laid end to end ...
stretch into forever.  

XAngel~
Interesting take ... and you're right.
For children take us into forever.

Denise~
I'm glad you liked.

TOE~
You DO attract fine ladies.
OF COURSE this was written with you in mind.
LOVE IT !  
You are such a refreshing look at today.

Amy~
Thank you.
I like the 'softer side' of me too.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 05-09-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is a beautiful concept Marge...not JUST forever...but a day or two as well!! *Goes good with a cup of coffee too*   Love Ya!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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11 posted 05-09-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, ANY poem about your cleavage gets an A in my book!!!!!!

That, plus the fact it is a wonderful poem with beautiful thoughts, of course....
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Devina~
Oh, YEAH !
A cup of hot, hot coffee with cream
and lots and lots of love. Mmmmmm ! Mmmmmm !

Balladeer~
I wish we had sound activation here.
You would hear me giggling.
You are sooooo imaginatively WONDERFUL.
I'm still smiling ... you have that wonderful
'way about you'.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 05-09-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Marge: Love the wording.. and ROFL, well, if I could @ Bal...LOL

HUSG
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Marge~
    Bravo!   This has very strong meaning to me.  I know you understand, reading my work as of late.  I love the way you express your feelings.  Thank you -  you once again have brightened up my day a little more!

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Rainbow....Everyone laughs at Balladeer when he's not around yanno?...LOL
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16 posted 05-09-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Marge
You're a great person and I love everything you've said and I'm sure the personwhom you love is very lucky.

(((((((((((hugs))))))))))))))
A_L
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Ah, love like that is always a good thing  
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Forever and a day or two - it just keeps going on.
Really sweet and touching.
I enjoyed it!  
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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RainbowGirl~
Hello, sweetness.  Gentle hugs for you.
A soft chuckle at that Balladeer is A-okay !
He keeps me in 'stitches'.

TerryW~
I do understand.
Hugs, sweetie.

TOE~
You're a loveable scamp.

AmazonLover~
'Tis I who is the lucky one.
Thank you.

Hoot~
Hi hon. Thanks.

Lori~
So very sweet, yes.
It just has to continue beyond eternity.
Thanks to all.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Oh, Marge, you are so prolifically gifted!  You ought to be making tons of money on greeting cards of ALL kinds.  Your poems are outstandingly better than almost all those that I buy.  And you seem to write them effortlessly, with an inborn talent.
~ ~ ~
This is exactly how I feel about my husband, and I could never have put it better.  I'm keeping it, and I pointed it out to him as such!  You're a treasure!

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I loved this Marge!  That last line is just perfect!!!

~Kellsue




 Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 05-10-2000 08:08 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rosemary~
Well, I sure thank you for that !
Now that you brought it up ..
I've got this plan ...
print mine out ... and send me the $$$ !
I'll even give you a discount ! ! !
I LIKE THIS IDEA !  

KellSue~
Thank you for your kind comments.
Glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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23 posted 05-10-2000 08:12 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sweet sentiments Marge. A perfect message to someone you hold dear. Must be someone special.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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24 posted 05-10-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marge~ I know you wrote this for Toe!(LOL) He's an inspiration for us ladies!

This is beautiful, and yes, you should be working for Hallmark. -SEA
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