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Forever And Ever And Ever

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Marge Tindal
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Forever And Ever And Ever
~*Marge Tindal*~

For just a little longer
For just a little more
One chance to be with you
One chance to open love's door

For the simple little pleasures
For the quiet solace of your love
Gathering the everlasting peace
Gathering the visions from above

For love for the sake of loving
For love in the form of you
Love in love with love
Love in everything you do

For caring and sharing
For caring about me
Caring about my heart
Caring where I'd be

For all the years you've loved me
For all the memories we've shared
Cherishing all the love we've made
Cherishing all the times you've cared

I will love you
Forever
and
ever
and
ever

and maybe
a little
longer





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-09-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

The gentle understanding and quietness shared in a long, mature romance is so uplifting and heartening.  You've stated this beautifully Marge.  This line made me sigh "For the quiet solace of your love".  Take care, and thank you again for your wonderful comments to "Drifting" ...

Much appreciation,
/Kit
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2 posted 05-09-2000 08:22 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I am in total agreement with Kit, Marge...the dedication of a lifetime love has a quality like no other. This one made me teary...and that is good!

"For love in the form of you"

...how poignant, this.  

~ Claire


 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 05-09-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kit~
For all the enjoyment of the excitement that loves brings us ... there is a beautiful quality in the serenity and comfort we find in those dedicated loves.
Thank you always for sharing such thoughtful responses.
I greatly enjoyed your 'Drifting' thoughts.

Claire~
Sometimes it seems that 'lifetimes' are so short that we need to flood them with all the love we can.  I know you are very much aware of these feelings.

Teary-eyed is a good thing, I agree.
Smiling with the memories is also good.
Smile, my friend.
I'm so glad to touch your inner spirit
with my thoughts.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 05-09-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Your writings overflow with the love in your heart, Marge! This is lovely!

Denise
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Wow Marge I really loved this poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.  
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6 posted 05-09-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Love can't get much sweeter than this dearest!!! *Forever and ever...amen* (know that song?) Loved this!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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7 posted 05-09-2000 12:33 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Wonderful, Marge....I love this one!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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8 posted 05-09-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Marge~
     I love it!   Ilove it!   I love it!
With All my heart (and a little more!)
You are wonderful!



Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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9 posted 05-09-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is the poem that should go on a card...such a personal poem, but yet universal in appeal.  Beautiful!
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Marge, you are such a romantic!  Bet you have never heard that before.  
If you continue writing this well you are bound to become an excellent poet    
(teasing)
Will have to give you a "10" for this one.  Actually I don't believe I have given you anything less on anything you've written!
How's that for perfection!!
Cheers!
dh


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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Denise~
I am blessed with much love.  Thank you for letting me know it's evident.

Dolphin~
Thank you for liking.

Devina~
I do know that song and it so sweetly
sings in my life.
Love ya'

ESP~
Hi gal - so pleased you like.

TerryW~
With all my heart and a little more,
I appreciate you greatly.

Martie~
You should have received your e-card
by now ... hee - hee !  Love ya'.

DannyH~
Guilty as charged !
I don't claim perfection ...
but with a 10 ... it's close huh?
(I'm blonde too ! )

Love to all for your wonderful enthusiasm
on this piece.  
You just kind of make my day !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 05-09-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Marge, isn't love wonderful, especially when you realize there is a lot more to it than animal passion (though I don't knock the animal passion part...not me...nope). But it's such a wonderful feeling to love, and receive love and know it for what it is, as you obviously do.  Very beautiful.

j.
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Enjoyed your poem very much!!!!!!
Marge Tindal
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JWesley~
Yes.
Thank you.

VanDana~
Thank you my friend.
So nice to know you're in here reading
and posting.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com             



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-09-2000).]
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This is so beautiful, so heartfelt, and so touching.  
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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There you go again, Marge, expressing my love for my husband better than I can!  But what a gift!  I get to show it to him, and tell him that it is exactly how I feel!  Thank you!
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Love is truly a wonderful thing Marge, and nobody could have said it better.

Marina
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Lori~
Thank you so very much.

Rosemary~
Just the thought of you sharing my words with Dale, sets my heart aglow.
What a wonderful compliment, my friend.
My heart thanks you.

Marina~
Thank you.  Oh, it is wonderful and I hope it's said by hearts all over the world everyday.

Thanks, all.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This drips with love and sweetness....but could expect no less with you Marge....

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


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What a precious message to someone who has obviously stolen your heart.    Beautiful words. *S* Your subject is indeed fortunate.

 
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tiz sooo sweet yuh
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Oh Marge this was so dreamy I do so love your talent   YOUR THE BEST hugs tracie~

 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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This was just as good as the last one Marge. . .it would seemt that the Romantics have taken over for a while!!

Wonderful poem and that song that Devina mentioned automatically came up in my mind before I even saw this one!!!  You should find it and listen to it!!!

Excellent my romantic friend. . .

------------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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David~
Well, I can promise that I'll try not to disappoint you.

Brandyn~
Thank you for the kind comments.
Yep .. love is something special for sure.

Walt~
Thank you, my friend.

Tracie~
Awwwww !  I love you, my friend.

Sven~
The song is a favorite of mine.
Yes, the 'romantics' are here to keep you company.
~*Marge*~


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