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I See You

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eyesplus2
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0 posted 05-09-2000 05:40 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2

I saw you in my heart
and my heart leaped

        I saw you in my mind
        and my mind raced with thoughts of you

                  I saw you in my eyes
                  and my eyes sparkled with joy

                   I saw you in my life
              and my life was a dream come true
        
I saw you in my love I gave to you
  and I gave it more and more to you

   I saw you with me
  and I saw nothing else

  I loved you
  and I saw you love me too..........


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-09-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've shown wonderfully that love is "not" blind ... lovely poem EyesPlus2 ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
Brandyn Sand
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2 posted 05-09-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Brandyn Sand   Email Brandyn Sand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Brandyn Sand's Home Page   View IP for Brandyn Sand

Very nice!

 
mete out
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3 posted 05-09-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***eyes,
it has been one of the best experiences in my life to look into my partners eyes and to be able to see that he loves me.
you have mirrored this feeling so well.
well done.  


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Poet deVine
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4 posted 05-09-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sigh! A love poem..nicely done!!  
 
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