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~* Intense & Heavenly Love *~

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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 05-09-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

~*  Intense & Heavenly Love *~

He pulled me near ~intensity~
was all I felt - him holding me...
"Don't cry for all the star's above,
they're meant to fall, not meant to love."

He whispered deep, "Come fly with me,
we'll fly beyond the stars - you'll see..."
He put his hand so strong on mine,
"Our love - will all the stars outshine..."

In his embrace, I flew so free
the sea of love's tranquility -
Up in the heaven's sweet embrace,
he kissed my eyes, my lips, my face.

He then looked deep into my eyes
and whispered soft, " I realize
that this intensity we share,
is something precious, something rare."

"Will you forever fly with me,
no matter what will be, will be?"
"We'll soar as one, past stars that fall -
you won't remember them at all..."

"Empty, you'll no longer be -
but burning with ~intensity~
Far brighter than the star's above,
and higher, cause you'll hold my love."

My heart it soared, right then and there
stardust shimmered everywhere -
His emerald eyes, were now for me
His love intense & heavenly...


-poetFemmeFatale
May 8, 2000


***  Thank you my love for all your constant inspiration and enthusiasm.  It's so refreshing to be around someone who has a love for life.  I knew that eventually, my waiting would pay off, and  I knew my sights weren't set too high!  Thank you for believing in all the things I do, I never thought I would find someone woven as intricately as you are, and I thank God above that I didn't miss out on my dreams coming true, in you.  Love is possible, when you're with the right person.  I see that now, in your eyes. * *dusty love to you...  
© Copyright 2000 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 05-09-2000 03:21 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Gen..you've got it bad girl!!! and at the same time, got it good, good to be in love...I love seeing this side of you....of course I love romantic poetry....write some more...
RSEvans
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2 posted 05-09-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans


:P
Stars indeed, will never last
Falling since the ages past
Forged then from the heavens cast
To fall tward Earth as seasons pass.

Do not hang there on a star
Be wherever you really are
See what happens within the hour
Do all that is within your power.

Live your life not for tomorrow
For that will only cause you sorrow
Live your life just for today
Things were meant to be that way.

Big Bro
Parker
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... the old black rum


3 posted 05-09-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

poetFemmeFatale, loved the way you discribed this. Its a starry kind of love poem, the kind we all dream about.

Parker
Aimster
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4 posted 05-09-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

--PFF

This was written with such LOVE!! I liked very much. Beautiful expressions you have penned here all wrapped up in the elegant style i have come to know from you. Great work, great work!!

Amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 05-09-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Celestially speaking, this was really good!
Sounds like Love has arrived....the stars are celebrating!
Nice writing pFF~~
poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 05-09-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

  Thanks guys, but this is just me "romanticizing"...er...is that how you spell it?  However, the inspiration - now he is real...and he doesn't mind being my muse.     I guess I do have it bad....hhmmm....hadn't thought of it that way.  Thanks R.H. for pointing that out!  LOL  And to my brother, I want to thank you for the addition.  You have much wisdom, and I'm lucky you share it with your little sis.     **curtsies to all**
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7 posted 05-09-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I loved this...I hope I will also find it one day!!!
WhiteNite
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8 posted 05-09-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Lucky fantasy guy.. lucky muse too. =)  Nice poem Gen.

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


Janet Marie
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9 posted 05-10-2000 12:46 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

YOU MADE HIM UP???
damn, I was gonna ask if he had a brother...
or a dog even. LOL
exceptional poem gen, truly.
take care poetice chickie.
jm
Sven
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10 posted 05-10-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Ok Gen. . . I think that I'm finally accepting you in this "Romantic" state of mind. . . I kinda like it!!

This was just beautiful. . . so glad that your muse speaks to you in such a wonderful and poetic way. . . my fingers are crossed. . .

Excellent!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

First__Knight
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11 posted 05-10-2000 07:01 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Simply wonderful....Love your romantic side PFF

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Brandyn Sand
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12 posted 05-10-2000 07:09 AM       View Profile for Brandyn Sand   Email Brandyn Sand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Brandyn Sand's Home Page   View IP for Brandyn Sand

Outstanding!!  Oh my, this is definately a keeper!  It read so well *GR8 meter* and as for the content... *standing ovation!*  
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 05-10-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Romantic Heart - - Thanks girl!  I've just been lucky to find some wonderful people whom I can include in my life almost daily, and they love life, and always help me fly higher each day!  Pssst...and there's not even a FEE!     

Robert - - You're always there for me in so many countless ways.  Wish we could have been siblings from day one man!  Although that would have changed alot, so on 2nd thought, I'm just glad we have eachother now!  

Parker - - Indeed...we all dream & sometimes they actually come true.  Thank you!

Amy - - So grateful for your sweetest of compliments!  Glad you enjoy so much.  

Danny - - Well, my muse has arrived - although what we feel is a love of a different kind. Understanding, and not demanding...that's hard to come by.  It's a friendship love, if you will...but much better.  Thank you sir.

Tulip - - Your day will come.  Be patient.  Just when you're not looking so hard, he'll wander into your garden.  

WhiteNite - - You're so humorous!!  Er...I just spilled my tea on you methinks!  (laughing so !)  

Janet - - hehe  I should probably answer "yes", but the truth is, he's real...A DOG Janet??  Oh my...we've got to talk!  I'm going to make you an appt. right away....er....at the pound!  ROFLMAO

Sven - - I'm just curious...how did you see me before?     Adult?  *sigh*  It's been awhile....

First Knight - - (grin)  Thank you.  I love it too.  

Brandyn Sand - - *curtsies* for the ovation, and laughing at your meter!  LOL  

Thanks all, and if you don't mind, I'm gonna send this back through one more time, as my muse is yet to visit and see it.  He's been a little busy...   NO, not me!     
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 05-10-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pff,
Very romantic, very good. Enjoyed the read. *L* Sy
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15 posted 05-10-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Ah..... a beautiful love poem. You're lucky to posess such a feeling. Good job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Sven
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16 posted 05-10-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

How did I see you before Gen?  Well, not really Adult (but that was good too!)but Romantic in your own way. . . but not like this. . . this is more than Romance, this is devotion and passion and all that other good stuff. . .

I feel that it's been a long time since you've felt this way about anyone or anything. . . it's nice isn't it?  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

RSEvans
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17 posted 05-10-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

I too am glad to have such a wonderful sib...and although it is a relatively new development, I feel as though we have known each other a long long time.  Hell, how many other people have you been able to share your beach pics with?  
REBECCA ALLYN
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18 posted 05-10-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Beautiful!!!
So romantic!!


Lots of love,
Becky
lorilockheart
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19 posted 05-10-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Gosh girl, I know all about that intensity!  However, this one sounds pretty hot. Happy for you, and enjoyed reading something I can relate to so easily.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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