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Tom26
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0 posted 05-08-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Tom26   Email Tom26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom26

If I couldn't see you, I'd want to be
Blind
Beauty paralelled, I'd never
Find

If I couldn't hear you, I'd want to be
Deaf
Searching the void your voice had
Left

If I couldn't love you, I'd want to
Die
But, not before saying
Goodbye
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Denise
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1 posted 05-08-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

That sure sounds like love to me!  

Denise
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2 posted 05-08-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Tom--

wow! this was intense and powerfully beautiful. u sound like a man in love to me   best wishes and take care!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Tom26, this one is sweet!
CocoBaci
 
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