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Open Poetry #7

If I couldn't.....

Tom26
Junior Member

since 2000-05-07

Posts 30

0 posted 2000-05-08 10:26 PM

If I couldn't see you, I'd want to be
Blind
Beauty paralelled, I'd never
Find

If I couldn't hear you, I'd want to be
Deaf
Searching the void your voice had
Left

If I couldn't love you, I'd want to
Die
But, not before saying
Goodbye

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-08 10:55 PM

That sure sounds like love to me!

Denise

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2000-05-08 10:59 PM

Tom--

wow! this was intense and powerfully beautiful. u sound like a man in love to me

best wishes and take care!

amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

3 posted 2000-05-08 11:09 PM

Tom26, this one is sweet!
CocoBaci

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