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Offshore Introspection

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Jester59701
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0 posted 05-08-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Jester59701   Email Jester59701   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jester59701

Seems that I'm living in my heart these days,
feels like a gusher that's about to burst.
Might be too late to stop exploration,
wish I could though, at times I fear the worst

Since I began drilling through the surface,
I can't suppress the things I'm finding there
Like an overpowering urgency,
and a once dormant feeling of despair

I won't be digging too much deeper though,
just about done exploring at this site
I'm seeing residual evidence of the treasure,
surfacing when I write

It's a supernatural resource that I'm looking for,
hidden deep in the heart
Purified crude that's called wisdom I seek,
perhaps fear of God is the place to start





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1 posted 05-08-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Keep up the good work, sir..I see improvement with every poem. I think you'll find the comments you get here in Open will be helpful!!!  
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Jesse when ya start drilling through the surface it can get complicated.
But once it's been broke a lot of wonderful things can come out  

Youv'e certainly gone to the right place to start! If ya need help let me know, you know my email or icq.
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