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Janet Marie
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0 posted 2000-05-08 09:06 PM


~Tapestry of Poets~

Putting pen to paper,
Exchanging words for rhyme.
Sharing a hearts sentiment...
Capturing a life's moment in time.

Expressions of affection,
Portraits of old pain.
Confessions from a souls shadow,
A poets wisdom to gain.

Creating tapestries of emotion,
Woven with affirmations of gold.
Whispered promises echo in the night,
Unveiling a prophets vision to behold.

Redemption confirms our presence,
Fate then casts a guiding light.
Revealing secrets of our past...
Allows our souls to take flight.

Janet Marie

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© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-05-08 09:17 PM


"Redemption confirms our presence,
Fate then casts a guiding light.
Revealing secrets of our past...
Allows our souls to take flight."

Oh how true Janet Marie ... when our souls can take flight through our pens, the world becomes a momentary haven.  I loved this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-08-2000).]

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2 posted 2000-05-08 10:25 PM


Your tapestry will never be threadbare, Janet!
Denise
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3 posted 2000-05-08 10:30 PM


This is very beautifully done, Janet Marie!

Denise

kitkat
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4 posted 2000-05-08 10:51 PM


I love this one Janet. It was Beautiful.
Aimster
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5 posted 2000-05-08 10:58 PM


Jan--

beautifully done as always. you know you're my poetic mentor, right  . you write with such elegance and wisdom. now maybe someday i will get my thoughts to come out across like yours do...i know i have the potential inside of me somewhere lol.

love ya,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

EagleOne
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6 posted 2000-05-08 11:03 PM


And you certainly know how to weave the words Janet Marie.

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

Parker
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7 posted 2000-05-08 11:15 PM


Janet, you pen us very well, you do. The Tapestries are thick an laden.

Parker

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8 posted 2000-05-08 11:37 PM


Janet~ your talent overflows!! Loved this. -SEA
TerryW
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9 posted 2000-05-09 01:04 AM


JanetMarie~
     My dear!   I can't believe I didn't join Passions sooner.  I hate that I missed these the first time around!   They are absolutely LOVELY!!!!!    

Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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