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Thank You....For Mothers Everywhere

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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 05-08-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thank You....For Mothers Everywhere

When I read between the lines
Time has laid upon your face
I can see a tough life
That only time can erase

You've been there for me
From the very first day
All the love you've given
I could never, ever repay

So I send to you a thank you
For this life you've truly blessed
To let you know I love you
And Mom you are the best


 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-08-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

--Jeff

Hon, this one was beautiful!! Make sure you let your Mom read this one. I know she'll be touched. I am sure you have touched all the Moms at this forum as well. Moms sure are special and a little thank you from time to time sure is nice. You're a real sweetie!

take care,
amy  

p.s. no im not a mom YET  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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2 posted 05-08-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I am touched by your sentimental feeling for mothers, Jeffrey.  Truly, you are blessed in this.


Michael
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your such a good boy...
perfect jeff..very sweet.
take care, jm
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4 posted 05-08-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Jeffrey,
A wonderful poem and just in time.  We may all be printing this.  
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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5 posted 05-08-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Your mother is a lucky lady also Jeffery ... my mother would do backflips if my brother ever wrote a poem!  This is a wonderful tribute to her ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
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6 posted 05-08-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is a lovely poem Jeffery. One that you should treasure.

Marina
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Jeffrey,
This is beautiful and a very nice tribute to you Mom.  Great job, my friend!!  I am sure your Mom will love it.  
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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Thanks everyone,
I am truly lucky to have the inspiration to write a poem such as this. My MOM is great.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

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It's an excellent tribute, Jeffrey. Very well done.
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10 posted 05-08-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ah, Jeffrey, this is so sweet. I'm sure she will treasure it!  

Denise
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Ah sweet, Jeffrey, belongs in a card
shop, don't you think?

hugs from netswan
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jeffrey,
     Wonderfully said, my friend!   I couldn't think of a better way to tell mother just how much she means.  You always have the right words at the right time!  
     Love Ya~


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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~I'm envious.
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14 posted 05-10-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

What a lucky woman your mother is to have such a caring son!!
I am sure she would love to have this!!
PERFECT!!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
 
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