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the way i feel

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miriam
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0 posted 05-08-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

The comfort of your arms,
Make it all worthwhile.
I see you looking straight at me,
I can't help but smile.  

I know though times will come,
But it will only make us stronger.
Our love is based,
On a love that we both hunger.

I hear your name in the wind,
I hear your laughter in the rain.
No one understands,
Strength and comfort in you I've gained.

Hold you in my arms is all I want,
See your deep dark eyes is all I need.
I don't want you to let go,
Holding you in my arms I'll fall asleep.

You are my friend,
You are my lover.
I can't pretend...
There is no other.



  miriam coronado


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lorilockheart
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1 posted 05-08-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

How eloquently you've expressed this deep, true love.  Good job.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Kit McCallum
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2 posted 05-08-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"The comfort of your arms,
Make it all worthwhile."

This is so true Miriam ... lovely sentiments ... I can feel the warmth.

/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-08-2000).]
miriam
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3 posted 05-10-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

thanks Lori and Kit...i just got a new love in my life...we're at the stage where every single second we want to spend it together... i just hope it stays this way.

  miriam coronado


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