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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-05-08 04:15 PM


In My Thoughts and Dreams
Amy M. Kennedy

You're in my thoughts and dreams
in everything I do
Everywhere I go, there is something
that makes me think of you
You make me smile, and make me laugh
sharing with me the depths of who you are
The more I get to know you, the more I treasure you
my shining star
Yet, a part of me I still hold back, wanting to make sure this is right
But as everyday goes by, my strengh is quickly giving way
and it's hard to fight
These are my thoughts and feelings
all laid out on the line
Hoping that I am not being foolish
and that perhaps you can be mine
Only time will tell the answer
whether you feel the same
But in my dreams I hear you
softly whisper my name
I don't know if this is the kind of love
everyone talks about
But I do know that you've captured me
that there is no doubt
With eyes so blue and a heart that is true
You've made me realize
I want to be with you!
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 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~




[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-08-2000).]

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CocoBaci
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1 posted 2000-05-08 04:23 PM


OOOh Amy, I like this one it's spoken from the depths of a true heart.
CocoBaci

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2 posted 2000-05-08 04:26 PM


Amy,
Great writing from the heart. Very descriptive of your emotion's. I hope whoever this guy is (someone we know?...lol)
gives you the answer you are hoping for.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


Michael
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3 posted 2000-05-08 04:46 PM


This is very beautiful, Amy.  Someone is very lucky, indeed, to have captured your affections.  

Michael

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-05-08 05:10 PM


*SMILE*
*SMILE*
*SMILE*

need I say more  
love ya, jm

Aimster
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5 posted 2000-05-08 08:13 PM


Coco--thank you for your sweet reply. writing from my heart is the only way i know how.  

Jeff--thank you for your encouragement. you are a sweetheart. No, you don't know who the person is that I speak of LOL.  

Michael--*wow* to get a compliment like that from you made me smile. Thank you. I too hope you find the love you are looking for  

Jan...let me SMILE   right along with you...shall we?? LOL. Thanks as always for your inspirtation and support.

Love you guys!
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

lorilockheart
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6 posted 2000-05-08 08:51 PM


Amy,
You know I know all about eyes of blue.  Wow, what they can do!  My heart is right here with you girl.  You've expressed my feelings too.  Thanks,
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-05-08 09:02 PM


A wonderful heartfelt poem Amy ... it is difficult to fight the feelings that draw us ever closer to the brink ... but when you let go ... what a wonderful ride!  Great poem Amy.

/Kit

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