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WTVamp
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since 2000-05-01
Posts 18
Salem, OR, US

0 posted 2000-05-08 04:01 PM


He took a chance,
     and asked her to dance,
         under the evenings stars.

She grabbed his hand,
     and she silently led,
          him out to the moonlight ball.

And they laughed and they sang,
     of the love they would make,
          being held by the night skies arms.

And as he walked away,
     she smiled and said,
          "Thanks for the chance,
          for such a lovely romance,
     and for someone to finally hold,

For someone to finally know...

© Copyright 2000 Warren (Vamp) Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2000-05-08 04:41 PM


Wonderful poem.     I look forward to reading more from you.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
2 posted 2000-05-08 04:55 PM


Vivid and beautiful.
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-05-08 09:17 PM


WTVamp~
Lovely and romantically done.
I love anything to do with the moonlit evening.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-05-08 09:20 PM


Sweet romance ... a thousand sighs ... a beautiful portray WTVamp.

/Kit

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