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PericolosoAmore
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0 posted 05-08-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for PericolosoAmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PericolosoAmore

As I watch from the tree so tall,
I see you ,
Searching,
For someone,
something,
Together you seek.

Both knowing what you want,
But somethone,
somethings in the way,
The someone,
something,
Is the me.

I feel the pain for you,
Hard as try,
I can't soet it out,
You deserve better,
Than whats been thrown a you,
One day my friend,
You will find,
The one you want,

Stop your searching,
She will come to you.

By PericolosoAmore.

© Copyright 2000 PericolosoAmore - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 05-09-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

A short and simple message.   Sometimes the best.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
angelswing
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2 posted 05-09-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Kappa ; a nice well written poem, Check your spelling though, you have missed alot of letters . I am glad you took my advice, poetry really is the place for you .
L.of.L. Tom .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-09-2000 05:56 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I'm sure they will appreciate your efforts Pericoloso ... sweet sentiments ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
 
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