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Open Poetry #7

To You .

PericolosoAmore
Junior Member

since 2000-04-14

Posts 31

0 posted 2000-05-08 03:46 PM

As I watch from the tree so tall,
I see you ,
Searching,
For someone,
something,
Together you seek.

Both knowing what you want,
But somethone,
somethings in the way,
The someone,
something,
Is the me.

I feel the pain for you,
Hard as try,
I can't soet it out,
You deserve better,
Than whats been thrown a you,
One day my friend,
You will find,
The one you want,

Stop your searching,
She will come to you.

By PericolosoAmore.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2000-05-09 02:30 AM

A short and simple message.

Sometimes the best.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2000-05-09 05:51 AM

Kappa ; a nice well written poem, Check your spelling though, you have missed alot of letters . I am glad you took my advice, poetry really is the place for you .
L.of.L. Tom .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-09 05:56 AM

I'm sure they will appreciate your efforts Pericoloso ... sweet sentiments ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

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