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[BABE]
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0 posted 05-08-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for [BABE]   Email [BABE]   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for [BABE]

I sit there watching every movement you make,
Every word you say, every step you take.

And when I expect, you are not there
But I have to act as if I don't care.

These feelings inside. How long will they last?
Will they become a thing of the past?

But right now there are there, as strong as can be.
I know you can't tell, but it's obvious to me.

Is there a chance we will get together?
Or will we just be friends forever?

I know I shouldn't, but I do.
I can't help it, I'm in love with you !
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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-08-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

[BABE]
Simple, sincere, nicely worded, lovely ...
Summing it up, a fascinating piece!

Really liked it.

Regards, Sudhir

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-08-2000).]
CocoBaci
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2 posted 05-08-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci


Babe, I like this one alot.
The expression of emotion and feelings is so vividly clear!
Cocobaci
JamesMichael
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3 posted 05-08-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Babe this is as lovely as they come.   James
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