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Nothing stops

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 05-08-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

  Nothing stops

Although my substance
Ripe in time
Voids in rest
Unexpressed.
You might not think
I battle yet
Childhood thoughts
Impressed.
Although my substance
Ripe in time
Voids its coup
It dances yet
A youthful tune
In dream
By phantoms
All new.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 05-08-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, Sy.  This is chilling.

love the ending - I too seem to be facing new phantoms... as if the old ones weren't enough to deal with...LOL  Great poem, love the change up on form.


Michael
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-08-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is a very different kind of poem for you
I like ...MUCH!!
and relate well...
those ghosts from the past seem to always drop in at dinnner time *S*
great work Sy...
take care, jm
Sudhir Iyer
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Voids in rest
Unexpressed.
...
Childhood thoughts
Impressed.


I am too! A change in flow from you. Different but great as usual Seymour.

Regards, sudhir
Dawn Eclipse
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4 posted 05-08-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Wonderful!  

" It dances yet A youthful tune In dream By phantoms All new."

Loved it!  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 05-08-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Michael,
Age doesn't change much except your looks in the mirror. Nice comment thank you.

Janet,
Thank you so much for the read and beautiful comment. *L*

Sudhir, Thank you for the great.

Dawn, Thank you for the wnoderful.
Martie
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I enjoyed your new format Sy...and the poem!
Meadowmuse
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Seymour, I cannot read one of your poems without enjoying your perspective. Well writ, as always...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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8 posted 05-08-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~

'It dances yet
A youthful tune'

Aye !  That it does my friend.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 05-08-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Martie, Thank you so much. *L*

Meadow, Wonderful comment. *L*

Marge, You are a love. *L*
 
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