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-- You're The Angel In My Dreams --

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WhiteNite
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0 posted 05-08-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

-- You're The Angel In My Dreams -- (5-8-2000)

I wish I had a machine, that could synchronize our time
Something that could link, your world with mine

Your covered by the distance, a heavy fog over light
And my days seem to begin, when yours become night

I see you across the way, your dance has just begun
Darkness lets me rest, but your shining like the sun

Floating on the dance floor, an angel in disguise
You blow a kiss my way, and it lands on fallen eyes

I fight to stay awake, I want to see so much more
Just once to join your dance, and glide accross the floor

But my eyes are falling heavy, it's hard enough to watch
Your light is getting faint, and our worlds drift apart

A vision of your beauty, imprinted in my dreams
Night binds our worlds together, and day cuts the seams

I wish I had a machine, that could synchronize our time
Maybe then I'd have the chance, to join your heart with mine

--Dave


 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


© Copyright 2000 Dave - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 05-08-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I certainly want to be the first to reply to this breathtaking piece...I am in awe.  This has got to be one of your best I've read yet.  So sincere, so loving...so warm.  I too, know how you feel.  And look, here we are in the same room at the same time!  Isn't it amazing?  hehe     I do so, want to dance...you have a few minutes?  (wink)  Miss you Dave, we need to do "tea" sometime, don't you think?  You keep writing like this, and you're gonna have ladies swooning all over you, you know.  BTW,  I am still laughing at the green contacts thingy...ROFLMAO  You are so funny!  And about that dropping from a plane, that's right down your alley, 'eh?  I wouldn't expect to meet you any other way!  hehehe  Just let me know before you "drop" ok?  
netswan
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2 posted 05-08-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

OH wow Dave ------I'm awake, but see
beautiful poet femme fatale got here first.
and she is younger, too, oh sigh.
I taught ballroom dancing for four years
so can stay awake, does that count???

My son and his girl work different hours,
to both their despair.

Beautiful  poem Dave -- loved it.  

netswan
WhiteNite
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3 posted 05-08-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Gen

  
Wow... Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I really needed the ego boost there.     And the first to reply?  Couldn't be more perfect! [LOL] And here I am, just like the poem says... about to go to bed. =) But I'll hold off on that for a dance, don't get that chance very often.  I can sleep anytime. =) Blow a kiss my way?

Yeah, the skydiving thing has my attention laltey... however there is one downfall... well.. two including me... ok.. bad pun on words.  NEways...

There is a downfall, you drop that fast from that high and your ears pop the hole way.  You can't hear anything for like a DAY after you get to the ground. =)  So maybe we shouldn't meet that way.     

Unless you think you can handle me screaming or mumbling the hole time... but then I think I'd still like to hear your voice without you screaming at me.  I've had enough of chicks screaming at me in the past. =)

But "tea" sounds awesome.     A deffinite must for future plans.

netswan

Actually I need lessons on the dancing part.  But Gen has promised lessons too... decisions decisions...  

Ballroom dancing?  Sure why not.  Get me all primed and ready to sweep her off her feet. =)  I'm sure there are other dances Gen can teach me. =)

Actually I've always kinda wanted to learn ballroom dancing.  Very elegant and romantic. =)

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott






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poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 05-08-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

ROFLMAO at you Davie boy!  You're so funny when you ramble on so!  hehehe  I'm still laughing at all you had to say to me and Netswan!  hehe  
Me thinks you've already had enough tea though, ok?  LOL  I think you've been drinking that real soupy-sugary kind that makes you babble!  hehe That's what I drink, so I know the signs!  LOL  You are too much!  I think I need to go reread all you said up there, I have forgotten what all to address here....lol   Get some sleep you silly man!  LOL  
WhiteNite
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5 posted 05-08-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Me?  Ramble?  I don't know what you're talking about. =)  Sowwy... I sometimes forget that not everyone runs there screen at high resolutions.  I'd hate to read that at 640x480.... eeeeek!

OK. I'll go to sleep now.  Thank you both for the compliments that will give me such wonderful dreams.  

This place is the greatest! =)

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 05-08-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sweetest of skydiving dreams to you sir...I will write soon, I promise!     Did I say beautiful poem? *curtsies humbly*  
Janet Marie
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7 posted 05-08-2000 03:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
---------- LOL
couldnt resist...you know how us insomniacs are.

WELL...
I AM SMILING LIKE -- BIG TIME NOW...
after reading this little jewel...
you and your muse need to be kissed for this one...
really great stuff here...
very nice my dave-gator...
if it is the tea -- keep drinking it.
later poet-gator.
jm

 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


8 posted 05-08-2000 04:32 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

I love this one...very sweet indeed.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
WhiteNite
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9 posted 05-08-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Jan - You're the greatest... well.. other than Rob.    Actually this new album has me stuimped.. I'm not too sure it's goiing to live up to my expectations ya know?  But anyway.. I hope your muse comes back soon.  I like these old repost, but I miss the ones that let me know what's going through your mind NOW. =)

Lizzie - Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


Alwye
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In the space between moments


10 posted 05-08-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wow, such beauty, such romance, such tender elegance....are you real?  lol..I have never seen a man having the kind of romantic heart and stunning poetic talent that you have.  I am in awe, and swooning, as always..

 *Krista Knutson*

"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
Gemini
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11 posted 05-08-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Tremendously romantic and moving piece.  I liked very much.
WhiteNite
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12 posted 05-09-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Alwye - [lol] I'm as real as they come. THANK YOU for so many kind words.  Wow, you've been around here for a while huh?  I must have been missing your poetry, I'll have to look you up.  

Gemini - Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


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