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A Man. . . This Man. . .
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A Man. . . This Man. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I can only be who I am A tender, caring, compassionate man Someone who loves life and lives to love A kind, gentle, supportive man I've shown you who I am A funny, warm, loving man You've seen the good and the bad An impaitent, sometimes insecure, sometimes childish man I've shown you what I am An empathic, understanding, outgoing man Someone who helps others along the way A healing, peaceful, spiritual man I've shown you everything that I am And it may be true that I am loved by many And it's true that I love many in return But deep in my heart I only have one true love . . . that's you You are the only one who holds my heart You know its shadings and shifts But yet you question my heart Even after all my gifts My heart holds true love only for you For you and you alone angel from above Want to know how I feel about you? Merely look and see. . .this man in love. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sven - this is so touching and well written. Thanks for sharing this. So open ----so heartfelt. netswan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
left me warm and tingly-toed---total Sveetness! LTY, m'lovely friend... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Another beautiful 'Sven-ism' Romantic and captivating. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Very nice writing. Touching and heartfelt throughout this piece. Romance at its best. Whoever "she" is that hold your heart, is lucky indeed. Excellent...  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is lovely Sven ... I hope she has the opportunity to hear your romantic words and ... beautiful. /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
--Sven This is why i call you the king of romance. with words such as these...how can she not fall deeply in love? you have such a gift with words m'friend...and always leave a zinger or two in your poetry that gets me right in the heart. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Sven, hope she sees and realises the truth. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . your words do mean a lot. . . I can only be who I am, no more, no less. . . and I thank you for your understanding. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Perfection! Marina |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, magnificent !! CocoBaci |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It takes quite a man to admit to so much... |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Simply Beautiful... ~Kellsue  Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Sven! Thats beautiful. Sincerely A_L |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah Sven...if she can't see it with these words, she's blind as a bat Lovely and romantic |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all again. . . just a little amazed by all the replies. . . they mean a lot, as always. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ I've said it before you have the most beautiful heart and soul and it shows in this, the woman you wrote this for must be very special and dear to you. Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven, this is beautiful and Iagree with Ruth, if she can't see it in these words then she is blind as a bat indeed!! Just lovely What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to every one of you. . . Ruth and DA, my muse is indeed not blind. . .which is why I wrote this. . . thank you again. . . --------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
Sven.... I hope she has read this and see's just how all of your heart belongs to her! I would just melt if some one wrote as much poetry as I have seen here lately. I would melt if my man would even just write me one. hehe  She is very lucky to have someone love her so much! Some one as loving as you! Wonderfuly written ~Sheri [This message has been edited by PanDol (edited 05-12-2000).] |
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